-feeds story cookies-

Will that help?

Oh, but seriously, I love this. The way you can shift from horror that chills me to the most beautiful and hopeful little piece... it continues to amaze me.

This is completely wonderful as a one-shot, though of course my little fluffy heart calls for more. I'm confident that you would be able to bring it together.

Bah, but looking at the date, it seems that you've left this forever as a one-shot.

Ah well, I'll just have to continue with my stalking.

Aw. That was sweet, and really sad when you consider what's going to happen when they actually meet. Poor Jareth. You made me feel bad for that spoiled brat.

THis is Awesome! Please, keep going!

Wonderfully done. I like the idea that he's always played a role in her fantasies, it makes logical sense as well as being a nice twist to the original story.

As great as this was, I think it works best as a one-shot, it feels complete as it is.

feed it, Feed it, FEED IT! Update please, Stallion

I love that idea that the labyrinth was not their first meeting that there were more dreams to comfort her :)

Believe me you want to keep this a one shoot. THe reason is simple; this story works because it tells us just enough to wonder whatout discovering that our hopes for the truth aren't what you had in mind. This beautiful little peice wouldn't work in any other format, I think, and should stand alone, as it does, in perfection.

Very beautiful, dear. I love your descriptions and word usage. Makes my stuff look like drool on a page, but dang, your good at it. So beautiful. This thing drew up so many images, considering what other games could have been played. And, your melodramatic-ness totally appeals to my fluff side.
Awesome job.

Ah...the eternal imagination, forever creating an infinite array of possibilities...

This is the most plausible back story to their connection that I've encountered so far. Based upon movie events and character behavior, it makes sense.

You're channeling Jareth, I see. May he continue to feed you more when you're ready to continue.

good

I look forward to that multichapter day. Till then, a very fun oneshot. I'm glad he's enjoying himself. Was the journey through the Labyrinth just a dream too or more?

Wow that was so good. you have a real talent for righting this piece was beautiful in every sense of the word and its a great look into what Jarith's mind may be like. I would really like to see where you go with this should you turn it into a multy chapter fic. Oh and just to let you know I’ve faved this:)

I rather like this as it is, but if you ever choose to continue it, I won't be one to complain! Very nice. I've thought about it from this angle before and love how you expressed it.

Thank you for sharing

Hashaha... Darling. I must chuckle softly at the blatant lie you tell yourself. You can't NOT feed this story. It is whispering to you even now, and though i will not push you to give us the rest of it, I won't have to.
When you are ready to let it out, and it has fermented into a full bodied and perfectly matured chapter story, you will give it to us... Nay... You will feed us to the demands of the newborn that comes from your heart...
Ah to be a writer and know that the tales we tell are not mere words being passed from one to another, but living and breathing incantations of energy being breathed into the very atmosphere we exhist in.
I look forward to the next story that comes from you.
:D