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| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet 2008-10-03 ch 7,  | abuseInteresting little story here. You're holding a lot back plot-wise, and personally I think it might be a little much, but I also think that might be a personal opinion. *shrug* I am intrigued, though, and I really like your descriptions and such. Well done. You obviously know exactly where you're going and how to get there. |
| aoitsuki77 2008-10-01 ch 7, | abusethis is a really good story! i hope you continue it soon =) |
| Miah_Hitsugaya10 2008-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAWESOME! i love your fanfic it's so cool! i hope mine will be as good as yours! Keep it up!! |
| HistugayaToshiro96 2008-08-31 ch 7, | abusePlease update soon this is one of the best story's that i have ever read! |
| ViVien 2008-08-30 ch 7, anon. | abuseTHIS IS SO COOL! please update soon, I'm totally hooked on this story line and the suspense is killing me. Please, please keep up the good work! |
| imlittlepenguin 2008-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI like your fic! Please update soon! |
| grilledjellyfish 2008-08-18 ch 7, | abuse*singsong voice* Kochira Urahara shoten... Cool chapter! This is turning into one of the most interesting stories currently available! Shrouded in mysterie and written absolutely in character! |
| Moon's-Wing 2008-08-18 ch 7, | abuseOh, this is gettin god...^^ |
| LavenderSkies 2008-08-17 ch 7, | abuseOh yay! They're going to Urahara's, so that means they'll probably meet up with Rangiku. I'll be waiting for the next chap. =D |
| Duchess192 2008-08-17 ch 7, | abuseThanks you for the update and nice job. I love the interaction with those two siblings :) This whole story is so amusing and interesting. I don;t know if you mentioned it already and I missed it but where did you come up with this idea, if I='m not prying? And again thanks so much for all the great stories that keep me going until DiamondDust comes out subbed... |
| Rawiyah-Taliesin 2008-08-16 ch 7, | abuseHaha, good luck expalaining that one Ichigo! Anyway great chapter, looking forward to the next one. |
| Khyara 2008-08-16 ch 7, | abuseThis story is great and it has such an interesting plot that always leaves you wanting more. I found your story by chance a couple of days ago, then lost it and re-discovered it again today. Loved it so far, can´t wait to see what happens in the next chapter.. |
| FuriousDeragonmaji 2008-08-16 ch 7, | abuseHis sister sounds alot like mine when she's pissed. |
| Everybody's Neesan 2008-08-16 ch 7, | abuseI have squealed with excitement so many times while reading this that I believe I may be losing my voice. Every time there is another revelation (which are excellently timed, by the way), I get excited all over again. There's a great blend of OC's and canon characters, and I love Ane-san! Looking forward to the next installment! P.S. Weird coincidence, you using Kouryuu for his name. I hopped from Saiyuki fanfics, where one of the main characters used to be called Kouryuu, to this. Creepy... |
| Stelra Etnae 2008-07-29 ch 6, | abuseThis is totally awesome... Things are looking interesting. I need some intense drama in my reads now and then, and this fic is really awesome! Update soon! |