Ahhhhh I can't believe that's where the story leaves off! I normally leave longer reviews when I finished a completed story but I'm too hasty to get to the next one that all you get is me frantically rambling about the ending. So sorry but it's your own fault. ;P

SO exicted to read the rest!

Yes Yes Yes - go Bella! ;p

I've only read the first chapter and already I'm smiling. ;p

that was so good! i cant wait to check out the sequal now great job!

I just recently found this story and I love it so far, you write very well.

Though I have one very small ting to say, Dubai and the Burj Al Arab are not in Saudi Arabia, they're in the UAE. Sorry, I just always find the smallest of details to nag about.

Wow, you wrote this so well... It's so peaceful and really beautiful. It will definitly be going in my favroites-as will you (wow I think that sounded really creepy)

Thanks!

Grace

:D Awesome story, loved it! I love the way you write, it's very descriptive.

That was the cutest thing I have ever read.

I'm bored with this.

Sorry, Kap.

/

Started out good, but just got way too happy and ladeedah.

Mur /

This is the danger with EC/BS fanfics.

They're too perfect.

Too fluffy.

I'm getting bored.

Too perfect.

I think beauty lies in the imperfections.

:O

My goodness!

I love this!

"“And I love you.” Edward’s plush voice sang to my ears. He shrugged away from the doorframe that he had been leaning against and pulled me into his arms. I breathed his scent deeply into my chest and rested my cheek against his chest."

Such a beautifully intimate moment. I actually sighed aloud.

Not much happened.

I'm still not sure what's going on with the birds (doves?).

xD

This was funny!

Oh Jasper, what a douche.