i like :)

woah~ this is weird~ I love it >w< aahahhahah i like how you made Ariel's outfit hahah♥♥

Hi~ I was so excited to see that you posted this. It was really different from what I expected, I can't pretend otherwise. But it draw me in instantly, and I think it'll probably be good for me to read something with a little intrigue and such intricate characters plots. The setting. :O The setting is so... It's mean, something ways it's vivid, but in others it's all toned-down and colourless, except for the characters. It's probably the opening line carrying through. :)

Wow. I have to say, as much as I always enjoy what you write, I think is the word-for-word the best thing you've ever posted. I mean, you always say incredible things, in a very pretty way, but here it's so... Professional, maybe? It's just hard to find a flaw. Every sentence is well-structured and thoughtful.

So... the plot and happenings and such... Hm, the opening scene with Roxas and Axel was very mysterious. Especially on Axel's part; he was pretty much deliciously intriguing. XD;; And the next scene with Roxas and the horse was so eerie. This setting is incredible and really makes me anxious to know more.

I loved your description of the differences between Sora and Roxas. That's much exactly what varies between them right there. But of course, nothing tops the way you write about Riku. ;O; So pretty... I'm very curious as to his behaviour though, and those ending lines. Wow.