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fye7 2008-06-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseharu! i really luv to read a sequel of this story of yours... hope there is a sequel.. XD AJA! (",)o
seafoam-pulse 2008-05-21 ch 1,	abuseFirst of all, well done on completing this fic! Keep going with your writing, you've got a bright imagination. Just a tip tho: It's not wrong to use labels for characters occasionally when it's totally obvious who you're talking about but you overuse labels. Use names more and tone down the melodrama.
demonofdestruction12 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseawe! CONTINUE IT! PLS. MAKE THE SEQUEL! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Oh, is Tatsuki not a virgin anymore?
iKatz. 2008-03-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseAah D: She forgot her memories? Sequel please. =DD I really want her to get them back D:
arrancar125 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusethat was so sad. she forgot about him in the end. but great fanfic though.
lazy.flower 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseAAH! CLIFFHANGER! WHY?!?!?! No xP Love the story so far ^^
ARAMAS Are We 2007-12-15 ch 1,	abuse...stare...Why? Why did she have to forget. Man this story is so good but she forgets?! Ah well its still awesome.
Daughter of the Draculea 2007-12-14 ch 1,	abuseso sad! T_T
charming.murderess 2007-12-11 ch 1,	abuseit has a weird title and an unhappy ending, how weird. but i like it nonetheless though tatsuki was OOC, i think including renji.. blah blah blah.. ok, u passed through my nonsense ranting.. woot! woot! how about another chap with happy ending?
shin-neh 2007-10-06 ch 1,	abuseyes.me.silly.reviewing.here.again. this makes you happy right?? seeing people reading your work.. your first complete work.. yes.. knowing how you made this story.. for what?? only one day?? lol that really is something to be proud of.. but lo, what is this?? err.. i hope you can finish another of your fic again so you can post the sequel of this story and another story about all bleach characters.. hmm... i wish you all the best.. and i'm hoping people will put this on their favorites list.. wha?? people really flatters you when they review.. but the very factor is that when a critique looks at this story.. -shame on you- sighs i know you write for people to see what is it that your mind is creating.. you write and write because that is your passion!! to infinity and beyond!! eh?? -shin- good luck in editing this story... be sure to give all your best!!
Nicholas Curee 2007-10-03 ch 1,	abuseu should write a sequel. hell, a whole series this is great!
lil'shinigami 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abusehuhu... i'm crying when i read the last part of the story... that's a great heart-breaking story... I really felt sorry for Renji in that scene... I can imagine all the scene... from the beginning till the end... can you make another heart-breaking romance story? i've read all your stories but this really touches me... I may sound really funny but it really does... I won't leave a review or at least a comment if the story is not good... I Love the concept... -lil'shinigami-
KaRisa-Hime 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseSOGI I LIKED THIS ONE ALOT ^_^ KRS~
Itachilover 2007-08-23 ch 1, anon.	abusesob so sad but so beautiful
es 2007-07-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is good but i need to know is it over or not

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