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Deucalion02
2009-11-09 . chapter 4
deathgeonous, i like the fic but im not too fond of ranmachan fics. at least give him shapeshifting capabilities so he can change gender at will, but try to do something bout the ranma chan this fic seems to be falling into the pattern of. and would you mind updating it soon cause i do like your writing. maybe do another fic with mara and ranma pairing, or ranma and aisha.
as you can tell im a big fan of ranma fanfics.

fan of your writing,
Deucalion02
Firehedgehog
2009-08-31 . chapter 4
snickers evilly
GeorgeTobor
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
This is Fun! Thanks for updating. AU and OOC are the core of all fanfiction and anyone who complains needs to stick to reading the original stuff. I tried reading Ranma - the english translation - and found I did not like it as much as Ranma fanfics.

I hope life gets better for you and yours. But I'm glad the writers block is better at least. Thanks again for writing.
keichan2
2009-08-20 . chapter 4
"No boom." :-D

Anyway, this is starting to edge to quite a complicated story...
I hope you won't let too much time between two chapters of this story, or we will be forced to re-read from the start each time, in order not to forget some important facts...

Please, update soon.
Taeniaea
2009-08-20 . chapter 4
great story
Dragon Man 180
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
I almost feel sorry for Azusa, I can't wait to see what he has to go through. But I think his wives should make him sleep on the couch after all the trouble he's caused.
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
Good chapter. Chaos is fun!!
DWM
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
What a chaos :) Had to re-read it, it's good for a laugh.
Dark Topaz
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
I am glad you are rewriteing this
7 Winds
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
It enjoyed this chapter it was funny how you had Azusa say out loud "I wounder how the weather in the after life is" that was funny. Also Ayeka getting ** at her father for spying on them and making a snap decission(spelled right) about Tsunami getting yelled at by Ranma.

Please update soon.

Your Eternal Fan,

7 Winds ;)
Cyde
2009-08-19 . chapter 4
Well, I had forgotten all about this story. I'll have to re-read it to catch up.
Cloud Dancer1014
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
-I have only two complaints: update more frequently, and make longer chapters! Other than that, I await further chapters from you.

Happy writing, and update soon!
Dumbledork
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
Damn funny. I enjoyed it.
stc-dragon
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
well that was funny i feel real sory for azusa... not he had it commin when he sent them to earth
JustinD
2009-08-18 . chapter 4
i love your work, its allways a laugh ^_^
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