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Reviews For: Alpha Force: Brody & Son - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

chop4tess
2007-12-14
ch 14,
abuseAh, what a nice ending. I really enjoyed this story, thank you for sharing it with me! ;)
chop4tess
2007-12-14
ch 13,
abuseYAY!! *does happy dance*
chop4tess
2007-12-14
ch 12,
abuseEvil evil man! But Amber was really stupid, you don't wind people up is thay have a gun and you don't...
chop4tess
2007-12-14
ch 11,
abuseDun dun dun!!
chop4tess
2007-12-14
ch 10,
abuseI wonder what is going to happen next, will Alex be ok, will ben be ok? Questions questions, i look forward to your next update.
black oblivion
2007-12-09
ch 14,
abusethat was awesome :D really good. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for ags, various things in life dragged me off FF, but I'm back now, and loving the stories :D
SuperTD
2007-11-05
ch 14,
abuseI love it! Why did it have to end?
Just one mistake I found.
"The others are still in their own rooms sleeping". The rest of it had been in the past tense, but was in the present.
Hope you do another AF fic! Pretty please!
Elledreamer
2007-11-03
ch 14,
abuseAh great you've done! I loved the last line and the little chick!
This story is so good and you're great at writing.
I hope you will be able to, and want to write another AF fic but if not, enjoy writing other stuff!
Elle xx
My-name-is-foxglove
2007-11-02
ch 14,
abuse(applaudes) GREAT ending spinkle22 keep those stories comin' I'll be bored without em! ;)
DragonTyc
2007-10-30
ch 13,
abuseNice chapter... really well done!
My-name-is-foxglove
2007-10-30
ch 13,
abuseBrilliant chapter! I'm sure no one could have written it any better!
SuperTD
2007-10-30
ch 13,
abuseYay they're all alive! Me happy now! Yay!
Elledreamer
2007-10-30
ch 13,
abuseWo! Exciting! Loved it! Can't wait to see how it all ends!
Elle xx
SuperTD
2007-10-30
ch 12,
abusePoor Karen! I was sure you were going to kill amber then!
emmalea21
2007-10-28
ch 12,
abuseoh wow! this is so good! i love it! can't wit for an update. good on you.
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