Maybe you could do a sequal to this?

Loved the story! Your a great author!

this is my idea

Chapter ? part ?
"Aang!" Katara screeched. Aang was falling into his own death. Katara waterbended Azula away. But it wasn't long intel she was up and attacking Katara again. Sudden pain ripped through katara.
She was not breathing for a moment. She fell on the ground...
/Katara/ Yue... It was YUE! /Katara... get up... they need you... AANG needs you/

Tophs POV
Toph lost Katara's vibration. She was dead. Aang was falling from the sky. Sokka is surronded. They would not win. "HEYAH!" A voice. "Sokka!" she yelled. He threw his boomerang at Aang. It cought his shirt and pulled him from the hole. Aang landed roughly on the ground. "Sokka you saved Aa..oh...oh no..." Toph said. Sokka was crying by his dead sister. "I... I said...I promised dad I would protect her..." He sobbed loudly. "But I didn't keep my promise..." A cracking sobbed echoed. "Just like with" He hugged Katara. "Yue." He choked out.

Katara's Pov
I was floating in nowhere. I was looking down at the battle. The battle was terrifieng. But they're alive. Alive and safe. KAtara WAS the painted lady spirt now. The moon spirit stood beside her. She cried. Yue stared at her. /You can go back/ Yue mouthed.
/How? Anything!/ Katara breathed out.
/You must never EVER tell any one. But... the avatar state is within me. I could give it up so you will live./ Yue looked down. Katara stared at her. A single tear ran down her face. /No. I can't give up such power just to bring me back. I will see them again/

Aang POV
It must of been six hours since Katara died. Aang choked. Sokka, Appa, Momo, and even Toph were greiving. He closed his eyes. There infront of him was the painted lady. She held out her hand. Aang grabbed for her. She was coming back into there world.

Katara's POV
I haden't gave up the state. But avatar Roku said if I went back, I would stay with the painted lady's marks.
I saw AAng. Tears flowed down Katara's face. "TOPH! SOKKA! COME HERE ITS KATARA!" He yelled happily. Sokka hugged Katara. They were back. They were back.

You like? I just randomly wrote it. good luck!

Ha! You're giving me some credit. You deserve it all. You actually have the motivation to finish a masterpiece and it's tough. Congratulations my friend. You've created a legend.

Alright I helped you a little. But seriously everyone, give it up for Zapenbits.

(sob sob) That authors note made me want to cry. and as for the story i give it two thumbs way way up.

Did you research Season 3? I know that some of the chapters are named after the real Season. (Yes, I've been doing my homework) But is the story actually all your or...did you do some digging?

Yay! You'r finished! Wonderful story!

Ah, it's over. You should've done the wedding though. That would be nice. And I think a funny oneshot would be like Zuko getting annoyed with the whole Fire Lord thing and going out as the Blue Spirit. Then he comes home to a very mad Katara. Or atleast she pretends to be mad, then smiles at him... Or water whips his butt for leaving her there.

*claps* Bravo. I have yet to complete a story. XD
Good job. I liked it. If the third season had the same pairings I'd be happy. And also the only weird parts were the swamp forest bit. That's it. But weird is STILL cool.

Aw, it's over, so sad...No offense, but it was kinda weird how accepting Sokka and Aang were of Zuko. But it was still cool. Loved the story!

Wonderfull chapter love the way Toph and Anng ar getting close. They make such a cute couple!

wa! I LOVE this story! Oh... I wish you would continue this... :)
Anyway, wonderful work!

Ah. It's almost over V_V That makes me sad. But I loved the chapter. ^_^

UPDATE SOON!!

Hey that was so awesome! My computer finally let me read it and there better be more girl. or you'll be sorry! You're such a Baca!

*bows* Then this is my second to last review.
I loved the chap. Took me a few paragraphs to get used to the flashbacks but I reread it and was fine!