i love it!
very agnsty
great job!

hi! the story was really great and those emotional bits fit in very well. nice one shot! and all that green is really nicely described. my favourite part was the ending, eventhough it was supposed to be a sad event, you managed to bring out a little joy with the picnic, the weather and all that nice green. keep up with the great work! love all those emotions you put into your work! and if this story is based on your alter ego, all i can say is WOW. haha! harry's green eyes remind me a lot of lily's! i love james and lily stories and occasionally , if i find great harry and hermione stories like your's, i just enjoy reading them. ron is ok, but (i feel) harry doesn't really suit ginny and hermione & ron's bickering (to represent love and all) just isn't right. so harry and hermione is the way to go! haha. sorry for the rambling there! =)

I thought that this was beautiful, and creative in its own way, the way that Hermione would associate Harry to green..great job!

great story!

That was very unique!!
I liked it alot.
Good job!!

~Amanda