This was amazing.
Helena really fits my mood right now. I dedicate it to Hunter, who just left forever. :(
I'll add this story to my faves when I log in (Kelly Of The Even Star)...
:)

How did I miss this before? Stupid internet, always going down.

Anway, like just about all of you're writing, I really liked the story. It wasn't the cannon "everyone lives a happy life" type of story, while not being one of those stories that make you go into an emo funk from just reading it...

Also, I know that I havn't updated door of twilight in a while, but I have a good reason; I have a job so I havn't had as much time to work on th things I want to. But the next chapter is around 70% done, and should be up by the weekend.

On a side note; I put up the ONLY Riku x Yuna story just a couple minutes ago. It's a two shot, but only the first chapter is done yet. (Don't worry, I'll finish the next door of twilight chapter before I finish this one.)

A few words should explain my long absent review: 'Europe' and 'three weeks'.

Well, I loved this one-shot. It was so good! Angsty, friendshippy...It just sucked me in and refused to let me go! Keep up the awesome work in all your other fics. Adios!

Hmn. I've never been really a huge fan of song!fics; they're just too cluttered, usually, and aren't as appealing to the eye.

But, I decided to give this a try on a whim because I'm one whipped MCR fan-girl.

And I'm glad I did.

I really liked your style in this--it's very cohesive even with the added underline, bold/italic, bold, italc/underline, etc... effects. It's really quite...enthralling.

Plus, I love Riku and anyone who writes Riku well has my love. ♥

But, yeah, my only one true complaint about this is that you should lay off the bold/underline/italics; it sometimes comes off as unneeded and just sloppy. Not often, but enough. ;)

In spite of that, I still find this amazing and, well, just well written. I love it.

- Pixie

First, let me congratulate you on your choice of song. *glomps Gerard Way* As soon as I saw it in the description, I had to open up iTunes and turn "Helena" on. Then, of course, I had to pause reading while I sang along. Heh.

Second...it was so ANGSTY. I was almost afraid right there at the end that you'd make it a Rikucide (lawlz, wordsmush), but you didn't, so I was happy. I just wrote a one-shot almost exactly like this in my kairiku collection (guiltybeautylove), but mine was a lot shorter. And markedly less angsty. But whatev'.

Third...I loved it. :D

Yay! A fanfiction that I will read from you! How exciting! You have made my day. Considering I have finals tomorrow, that is. Other than that my day is good. You just made it better!

"He didn’t care if Aqua and Ven broke up. (It’s a stupid high school romance for God’s sake… It’s not like anything was going to come out of it anyway…)"

Oh my gosh, that is totally what I say to everyone. I hate it when people say that they love each other. It won't go anywhere! And when, like, seniors go out with juniors, or whatever (younger people, I guess)--when they go off to college, the relationship won't last! Considering the dude I have a crush on is older than I am, I suppose that could be hypocritical, but still. It would never go anywhere...

I loved that little section with Sora, Riku, and Kairi, where you couldn't really tell who was talking except for Riku. That was nice. I liked that.

Aww, what a sad ending! Oh, the angst! I really liked this. It was really interesting. And the whole thing just flowed very smoothly and went together very nicely. There's not much else to say.

Great job!

-Liz

I have to admit, I didn't like Riku in this oneshot. :x The attitude toward other people really put me off. He got better by the end, and I'm glad it was a happy ending for him, but it wasn't quite enough to redeem him in my eyes.

That's not to say the fic wasn't good, though! :D You certainly got his POV through clearly. Anotherg good job, Chibi~

this is definitely different from all the other one shots that i have read. you portray riku well as the somewhat emo and dark person. the lyrics are like riku's inner thoughts. maybe you can do one from sora POV.

aww, me likey
very meaningful
strange that I'm listening to "Keep Holding On"
I'm gonna write a oneshot...
it better be good
I'm in such a writing slump

whoa.

I wasn't breathing for the entire thing, I swear.

That was soo awesome. (:

I can't describe how awesome it is, but it is so totally awesome~

happy twenty-fifth fic~! xD I just remembered~~

-namikun

YAY!

I can tell it was a struggle. Things either write themselves or hide in a dark, deep cave and even the promise of cookies won't get them out!

I thank you so much. I very much liked the idea and Riku's thought patterns.

If possible, you've made me hate Riku even more. You have my hearty congratulations.