NO! u cnt make them break up! u cant :( please make a sequel or something, make them get back together PLS! its too sad, u need a happy ending or sumthin :( they love each other too much! great story thou! u have to make a sequel!

Wow you are a bitch...but that's okay cuse you misunderstood my review Here is my review won't be the Victim ch 8,Kinda sucks...KINDA SUCKS! It totally BLOWS! Damn ending! Damn story! Damn Johnny and Jennifer! Nice story...till the end that is...

And this is you ending AN: for chapter 8 Yay, it’s finally done! Please R&R. I know, the ending kind of sucks . . . oh well. Flames are for campfires!!

Now you see...no well here I’ll spell it out for you...I L.I.K.E.D Y.O.U.R S.T.O.R.Y! BUT like YOU said the ending KINDA sucked!

So don't be getting all bitchy at me for reading your fucking story and giving you my opinioun...kay if you can't take a little criticism then you shouldn't be writing at all!

Have a nice day and always remember assuming makes a ass out of u and me.

Kinda sucks...KINDA SUCKS! It totally BLOWS! Damn ending! Damn story! Damn Johnny and Jennifer! Nice story...till the end that is...

i love this story johnny is my favorite in the book

Man, can't wait for the sequel...it's really good.

why did she leave? was she pregnant?

i love is story cant wate 4 the nexs Chap.

i really love this story! i can't believe ur ending it here. u really should continue it. what was wrong with Jennifer? why did she leave?

omg! CUTE!! lol. this is adorable :)

aww poor johnny!! update soon!! :)(:

ok, i just read chapter 1 and i absolutly love your story and i thought it was halirious when jennifer was desperately wondering how a bottle of pop was going to help her.

ok this story is umm FLAT OUT AMAZING! love it!

totally keep going!

lisa

love it! i got to read the rest tomorrow, first day of school, crap ..
i really want to read this so keep going!

that was so cute! lovein it

that was awesome! i think i am going to fall madly outsiders love with this story!:)