|Reviews for Hospital Revisited: After David Recognized Lizzie|
| xwingpilot 8/29/12 . chapter 1
Nice. This was so sweet. I felt like it was a little bit rushed though...Could have spread it out a little more, though...
| askidkid 7/25/11 . chapter 1
I loved the beginning :) Very sweet.I wish the story was longer reminded me of Romeo and Juliet :D
| Tempe4Booth 6/2/10 . chapter 1
sweet i loved the ending
| Kaitlin-B 12/12/08 . chapter 1
| drama989 11/30/08 . chapter 1
that was so cute! luvd it!
| Danielle 10/11/08 . chapter 1
it was average...but it was way too short for me...i'm a writer, i write books all the time...i guess im just not into stories so short like this.
but it was ok, i hope to see more.
| SemperFiNeverForget051909 4/9/08 . chapter 1
Relapse and attempted suicide...NICE. how about spreading it out/Making it longer? That'll be cool.
| Buffy's boyfriend 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Short but sweet next time make it longer though
| LinkinParkLove 12/1/07 . chapter 1
I liked it, but I also agree it needed to be spread out more. It reminded me of Romeo & Juliet, only with a happy ending... kind of melodramatic, but good job. )
| miss seann william scott 11/24/07 . chapter 1
that was very choppy, no offense. it has potential, if you spread it out a little bit more. you are good person at coming up with ideas. however you just need to...
spread it out. seriously.
| Aquamarine Kitten 8/21/07 . chapter 1
WOW...relapse, attempted suicide, coming out of the relapse...a bit overdramatic if you ask me, but it somehow fit. nice job. :)