love this...part from chapter 4

-

You okay there Echizen? DANISH got your tongue?” He chuckled, barely holding back laughter.

“Shut-up, Momo.”

“Yeah nya, you better watch out; he might POUND-CAKE you.” Eiji chimed in.

“Shut-UP, Eiji.” Ryoma said, getting up from his pastry prison, unfortunately he slipped on a long-john.

“Be careful Ochibi. DOUGHNUT hurt yourself.” Momo said. Ryoma growled in frustration and then kicked the offending pastry away.

“That’s right Ochibi, show it whose boss; BUNT it away! Nya!” Eiji laughed.

“SHUT-UP, Guys.”

“He’s fine Eiji; he’s a strong guy; this is MUFFIN to him.” Momo said, now full out laughing.

“SCREW YOU GUYS!” He yelled angrily.

“Ryoma Echizen! Such language, Nya! We’re going to have to SCONE you!” Eiji gasped with laughter, now quite red in the face; tears welling up in the corners of his eyes.

Ryoma lashed out angrily in his frustration.

“Echizen, calm down; don’t get FROSTED.”

“Sorry nya, we didn’t mean to be CRUMBY.” They both continued to laugh tears pouring down their faces.
-

hahaha its really hilarious...anyway good job :D hope for more stories coming from you

This is really good!! I love your story line!!

Naruto references ftw!

I LOVE THIS STORY!

I think the whole upside-down make out session between Ryoma and Sakuno is so cute =)

I loved this story! :D :D :D

Sorry it took me so long to read and review the last chapter. School has been so busy.

I liked how Sakuno stood up for herself and fought. I also like how you had a girls swim team in there.

I guess it turned out to be a major April Fool's joke for all of them. Still, Echizen would have gotten in trouble for running around without his pants, and Sakura would also get in trouble for putting glue on the chair. Besides, glue shouldn't be that sticky, and people should stil be able to resist it and stand up. I'm glad it all worked out.

The Easter bunny scene was funny. I can imagine the 2 michievous guys dressed up in costumes. Good job on the descriptions!

Jr. high students can't be hall monitors. They have to be adults. In Seigaku, students also don't walk or run from one class to another. They stay in the same classroom all day, and it's the teachers who change classrooms.

OMG! This chapter is HILARIOUS! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT. Your work on Fuji is incredible. But, go easy on Tezuka. The guy ain't that bad. NICE touch though!

sorry to mention but... some of the parts make me very confused... but the story is getting interessting

CUTECUTECUTECUTECUTE story!

LOVE THE ENDING! :D

hope to read more of your stories! :D

lovelots,
merylin

...
I pictured Ryoma in antlers. I could barley read after that because I was laughing so hard. WELL DONE.

This story was so cute, I couldn't believe how long it took for Sakuno to realize that Ryoma loved her, but it was way better that way. And I'd wondered when you said that Sakura had pink hair and it was perfect that she'd ended up with Sasuke in the end~nya! Wow. I just realized that this review is really long. Oh well! Great job~nya!

Okay, this story absolutely ROCKS!, and I love the SasuSaku twist at the end!!

cool! ^^ love it. lol about sasukexsakura hahaha.
oh yeah lol for the costume too hehe.
loved it.
please make more fics like this
thanks

reading this... hm...=)

u r one heck of a good writer!
banzai!
u rock!
haha
this chp's so funny i ended up fallin down from my chair, laughin so hard!
xD