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reeby10
2008-07-11
ch 1,
abusehehe that was good. i was gonna go look this passage up in my book but i realized someone else has my copy! so ill just have to do with this awesome rewrite! hehe :D
VickyVicarious
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing. Seriously. I am in awe. This fic was what converted me to Bartimaeus/Nathaniel. Just... wow. GREAT job.
The Aquatic Chewbacca
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abusefeck, i was SO waiting for the slash while reading that bit in AoS! i swear to gawd i was expecting it! this is a brilliant enhancement!
-tac
Kaitlin
2008-04-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, my god. XD Perfect. I actually grabbed my copy and read along, and oh, boy, it really is quite similar. Ahaha, you made my day.
riverfeathers
2008-03-21
ch 1,
abusescrumpdiddliumcious :)
that was such a tease!!
ShiTiger
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. I love how you wrote everything Nathaniel was feeling, and still kept Bartimaeus in character. You can just see this scene leading to a lemon in the future.
Hospitality on Parade
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseO_O *topples out of her chair* Holy crap, Barty is such a tease.
Kyrian
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseOh, that wasn't canon?

What was this, Surely not. Clearly that was in the book. Stroud just forgot to write it in...

Seriously, though. Good job. Are you Jonathon Stroud in disguise?

And why exactly ISN'T that in the book?
801-tan
2007-11-28
ch 1,
abuse=O My thoughts exactly.

Awesome fic! ^_~
hermione032192
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseAwesome :)
BakuraxRaven
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseAmazing! Please update this soon!
Akari-chan
2007-10-07
ch 1,
abuseWhile I'm happy for seeing that I wasn't the only one that thought that Bartimaeus and Nathaniel were TOO close in that scene, I'm happier because this is AWESOME rewriting for it. *bows* Awesomeness. Pure awesomeness.
The Little Cog Girl
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseBrilent! Slash realy is only good if it is between ( sary my spelling is horrid...) the right caricters... This defenetly hits the mark!
Saint Mirror
2007-07-09
ch 1,
abuseOh man...I dont usually like slash pairings but that was...AWESOME! Good job!!
Wave Ryder
2007-06-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh.My.God. I think my eyes just fell out of my head O_O. Really spectacular writing, completely believable and fantastically canon all at the same time! I must admit, this was what I was thinking in that sene, but certaintly not as vividly as you wrote it:) I must go to the C2! :)
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