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| reeby10 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abusehehe that was good. i was gonna go look this passage up in my book but i realized someone else has my copy! so ill just have to do with this awesome rewrite! hehe :D |
| VickyVicarious 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. Seriously. I am in awe. This fic was what converted me to Bartimaeus/Nathaniel. Just... wow. GREAT job. |
| The Aquatic Chewbacca 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abusefeck, i was SO waiting for the slash while reading that bit in AoS! i swear to gawd i was expecting it! this is a brilliant enhancement! -tac |
| Kaitlin 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, my god. XD Perfect. I actually grabbed my copy and read along, and oh, boy, it really is quite similar. Ahaha, you made my day. |
| riverfeathers 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusescrumpdiddliumcious :) that was such a tease!! |
| ShiTiger 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love how you wrote everything Nathaniel was feeling, and still kept Bartimaeus in character. You can just see this scene leading to a lemon in the future. |
| Hospitality on Parade 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseO_O *topples out of her chair* Holy crap, Barty is such a tease. |
| Kyrian 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, that wasn't canon? What was this, Surely not. Clearly that was in the book. Stroud just forgot to write it in... Seriously, though. Good job. Are you Jonathon Stroud in disguise? And why exactly ISN'T that in the book? |
| 801-tan 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuse=O My thoughts exactly. Awesome fic! ^_~ |
| hermione032192 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseAwesome :) |
| BakuraxRaven 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! Please update this soon! |
| Akari-chan 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWhile I'm happy for seeing that I wasn't the only one that thought that Bartimaeus and Nathaniel were TOO close in that scene, I'm happier because this is AWESOME rewriting for it. *bows* Awesomeness. Pure awesomeness. |
| The Little Cog Girl 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilent! Slash realy is only good if it is between ( sary my spelling is horrid...) the right caricters... This defenetly hits the mark! |
| Saint Mirror 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseOh man...I dont usually like slash pairings but that was...AWESOME! Good job!! |
| Wave Ryder 2007-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh.My.God. I think my eyes just fell out of my head O_O. Really spectacular writing, completely believable and fantastically canon all at the same time! I must admit, this was what I was thinking in that sene, but certaintly not as vividly as you wrote it:) I must go to the C2! :) |