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Jiberty Fan 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed "4 A.M." because, it gave us a bit of what Liberty's life must really be like now that J.T. is gone and for also showing through simple snap shots of the future that J.T. and Liberty could've had together. I don't think the Degrassi writers have done much with exploring what Liberty's life is really like now without J.T., because, she seems to be okay on the outside, but, I think that Liberty is holding a lot of things inside and in reality her feelings seem to be ignored by the writers and that just because the writers have chosen to ignore Liberty's feelings that this doesn't mean that she isn't in pain. Thank you for giving Liberty a voice. I hope that you will feel inspired to write and share more J.T. and Liberty fics soon. You gave me an idea for the next chapter of "Listen To Your Heart."
kialajaray 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abusedid he die in this one? or move? its a good story. but its kinda sad that shes stuck missing him.
giveyourimmortalitytome 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abusethis was amazing! i don't know what you're talking about when you say it's not complete or whatever; it's finished and full and depressing and realistic and simply amazing! you're so good at characterizing liberty - you strike the perfect balance her severity and her frailness. beautiful, beautiful job.
KibaInu 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abusethat's so sad,I love this one little piece,and you did a wonderufl job,did I say that it's so sad?believe me,if I could raise JT form the dead then I would(starts to chat around his grave)but it would not work,point is,I loved the piece!
radiance x 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abuseSo I'm pretty sure you already know that I think you're brilliant, but it should be said again: you're brilliant. I was so excited to see another fic by you. This was pretty in prose, sad in content. You capture all of Liberty's thoughts perfectly. My favorite lines were: She’s supposed to be moving on and pulling herself together but she’s not done breaking yet… and she’s not sure she ever will be. and: she doesn’t have anything to show off, especially when the best part of her was stabbed in the aorta. Aw, Liberty. :[ About the not being whole thing. . . I think the ending is great, it ties back to the beginning, but maybe it does seem a little abrupt. I only say that about the final line, though, as the paragraph before it is excellent.
cherryXbomb 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing. You really captured Liberty's feelings on JT in this one. I think its one of the best post-JT death fics I've read yet. Congrats, you've touched me.
wheredoesithurt 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseI absolutely loved this. "Because she's still in the dark." That was my favourite line. I hope to read more from you soon. :)
sunnycouger 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseThat's a really nice piece of writing. It's simple, but really descriptive and it's easy to imagine it. It feels real. Really nice.
lilacsecrets 2007-06-10 ch 1,	abuseHi this is nice but there does seem to be SOMETHING missing, I've no idea what it is but it's not there, other then that it's a nice oneshot. -l.s. p.s. Maybe it's the depth, I mean I geuss this story makes it sort of seem like JT and Liberty have only known eachother for a year or two or only as a love relationship, but they have something deeper a LOT deeper than love so I geuss that feeling not being alot emphasized (I mean yes you did do it) makes there relationship seem less then it is.

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