Good story. I'm hoping to write about a battle between Kenji and Shinya myself someday. I'm going to put this in my C2 because I'm collecting stories that portray the Himura family according to canon and Ses-EW-Hen.

that was a great story! i loved it!

hi hi ! great fic! thanx to me!haha should thank me for helping u! haha ok pls come and review my fic ok? ;P

Well, the concept was very good, but the story's pacing went too fast. Try to be more descriptive (ha! this coming from me!), and don't end chapters abruptly if you're not planning to do a cliffhanger. Add more details and don't make the story too rushed. But the plot of the story was sugoi though (glancing enviously;;)...they say the best plans are those that suddenly seem to be the easiest to think of once you know of it.

hi hi i don't wanna sound offensive or anything...but ..you sed that kenji has "hitokiri blood" in him...that just doesn't make sense...kuz hitokiri is assasin...and...well..how old is kenji? o.o; I like your style tho, i guess kenshin could be okaasama if you're REALLY openminded *imagines* what would happen with breastfeeding tho? O.o;;..umm...never mind! .

Otousama is what you mean for father. Okasama means mother.

Yes pple... I am Battousai X... I'll change it coz my fren will complain... anyway.. thanx for the tips guyz ! I'll change soon so watch for it ! Keep supporting me k ? ARIGATO !

Luff Battousai X _x

not bad...the ending was kinda *blah* though...you should try to expand it more...you know...more detail...don't let the story but concluded by like one sentence...add some more detail to everything...describe something here...and feelings there...and change the titles to Kenshin and Kaoru...KaoruOkaa and Kenshin otou ...kay?...

I loved it! Even though you say you don't know much about their characters, I think you really captured their characters in your fanfiction perfectly. Kenshin, Kaoru & Kenji forever! :)

First, I want to begin by saying that this was a great story. However...there are a couple of things that I feel I need to correct. First of all, the japanese word for 'father' is 'otousan'. The japanese word for 'mother' is 'okaasan'. These two terms are used when talking to your own family. It's a bit complicated past that...and, as much as it sounds cool, a thirty-minute battle or longer is impossible for even really good samurai. I've trained in kenjitsu a bit, and I know personally that a battle longer then ten minutes will practacly run you down too much to even move around. The samurai were taught kenjitsu in the hopes that they would never have to use it. However, if they must use it, then the objective was killing/defeating the opponent in one blow. For fiction aspects, this story is excellent. However, for realistic aspects, those points are important to remember. Again, I really like this story. Please don't take this review the wrong way...I just want to clear those things up a bit. I thought that the development of Kenji's character was very well done. All in all...I like this story. -

*wide eyes* Hey, Battousai Flame, you WERE Battousai X, weren't you? Your writing skills have really gone up!

great plot! *clap clap*.. just wanted to offer a quick piece of advice... hehe.. I'm pretty sure that Kenji-kun should be calling Kenshin otousama instead of okaasama... _;; correct me if I'm wrong here but before you do.. please do me a favour a check first.. keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your work.