o my god this story is amzing and i no that u made this some time ago i just wanted 2 let u no. i really would love it if u counited this story.

Love your story! Please do a sequel! It would be most apretiated! Btw Sesshomaru, why did it 'kill' your character as you said I thought it was cue and sweet story... Fluffy fly fluffy (shakes head and sighs) you just don't understand this kin of stuff.. Anway FL I absoultuly love your story! DangerOokami out 3 peace!

D im over a year late for reviewing this fic x.x

did you do a sequel? i loved this ficcy 3

LOL haha yah ur funny but ur tryin to get rid of us quickly to get bugged more don't u? well have fun writing the other story!

CrescentMoon760

LOL! i have never read any storys of all my 200 storys of sessxkag that had sesshoumaru, kagome and other people do that to jaken i'm so glad u did it cause he is so anoying and i bet he loves sesshoumaru because he said, 'Filthy wench! Remove your grubby hands from the esteemed and handsome Lord Sesshomaru's person this instant! He is only to be touched in such a manner by me, his most loyal and devoted servant!' so yeah and to tell u the part where i said right now about jaken liking sesshoumaru, i copyied and pasted i cause its 11:00 and im tired so yeah so long angd goodnight but i'm gonna keep reading now so till next chapter!

CrescentMoon760

LOL! poor sesshoumaru u kno those things hurt like hell and back again!

LOL!

loved it though i wish u would have written about the kids

I think I read this story, before, but just in case. I'll keep reading. I like the whole idea of her strength making her a youkai and I love the pairing, but... You need to work on your characterization, Kag and Sess are really OC-especially with the way you made their beasts. You seem to rush things too. I would have enjoyed these chapters a lot more if you had drawn them out and revealed her wish, the consequences of that wish, and so on in a timely manner instead of spilling them all at one. Showing them instead of stating them would also make your story a lot more effective. Some more description and plot and character development would be great. The itnerjections in the middle of your work is a bit destracting, though often funny.

Squel please i love the story -

enjoying so far

sequel! pweeze _ loved it! best seller totally best story ever written! and the little mini stories afterwards is cute yet funny! yes im weird lol bu seriously perfect story!

Hey,

I liked it a lot.

Hey,

I liked it a lot.

Hey,

I liked it a lot.