Nice to see you working on this story again. And well done for going back and editing previous chapters. I wish more people would do that... although there's one story of mine I should really go do that to.

You're back!
Are you going to stay here? Or are you going to disappear for a year (okay, I don't remember how long) again?
Please, please don't vanish. And, yes, betaing is a standing offer, if you want one still. I really like this story and want it to continue, please, even if I have to help out to keep it going.
Poor little Elizabeth. I feel sorry for her for having to go through this so young.

Oh Apprentice,

It is good to see you back. Don't hide behind a curtain, there is no shame in improving your already published work. This just means I'll have to read from the beginning again.

As for a long wait, I spent over 18 months pounding my head against a big old writer's block with Frozen so I can't throw any stones.

Keep on writing, you can only improve.

Mom

good. im adding it to my c2 ok?

Please write more soon. I want to know what is happening to Elizabeth, not Anakin. We know what has happened to Anakin.
Also, I have to comment that you had a lot of grammer/spelling mistakes in this chapter.

This is really good-I don't have time to finish it today, but I will be back!
~Alien Roxi~

I like the way your story is progressing and I like the relationship you've created between Master and apprentice. This is very paternal and nurturing which a child raised without its parents would need... and different again from what Anakin Skywalker had because he had his mother for his early years.

While I might not review often, never believe Momma does not read each chapter as it comes. The reworking has helped. Don't let school keep you from your hobby, but don't let the hobby mess with school work. Listen to Momma, she knows what she's saying.

Keep the creative juices flowing and watch your spelling and grammar.

Mom

I am glad to see events moving forward. I was beginning to wonder if we were ever going to get beyond Anakin being angst-ridden.

*Elemarth leaps up and hugs The Blind Apprentice*
The Blind Apprentice: "Um... get off me..."

Okay, sorry about that. But when I saw that somebody had actually UPDATED, I had to hug someone.
You have two places where punctuation and a space is needed: "He is Master Yodathe leader of the Jedi!" needs a comma & space after 'Yoda' and "she has learned so much in such a short timeThank you" needs a period and space after 'time'.
I find it odd that Elizabeth, who can hardly see shapes, has picked up eye-rolling, but who am I to ask?
The Wookiee's planet is spelled "Kashyk", believe it or not!

I am actually finding the timeline changes a little confusing. Unfortunately, I don't remember exactly what the timeline was, so I can't give you any useful advice there, other than Wookiepedia is a wonderful information source if you are finding you need to check a fact, or sort out events and people. I use it a lot for writing my stories, and it has really helped, especially now that I've found myself writing in a timeperiod for which I can't find the relevant books. An AU got rather long...
I'm glad you've been finding my suggestions helpful; it is really nice to know.

Please continue!

I think that was one of your best chapters yet.

I really like the way you are using italics for the telepathic comments. It is working very nicely. Well done. A few comments: Palpatine is spelled Palpatine, not Palpetine, and the way you have written about the lightsaber being lifted, it sounds like both Anakin and Palpatine have their lightsabers ignited. If I remember correctly, only Anakin had his lightsaber out at that point, and he was holding it rather close to Palpatine's throat. You need to specify that it is Anakin doing that, or the scene doesn't make sense. Apart from those errors, very good!

And now we MUST find out what will happen next! Poor little Elizabeth...
A few things (and don't think that I don't like it because I only review to correct things; I wouldn't review at all if I wasn't enjoying the story):
1)Thanks for italicizing silent communication. Much easier.
2)"She was able to block and perry his blows easily" - Perry should be parry.
3)"Padawan, you are here because we need to see how much skill you have with a lightsaber" - Yoda was the last person to speak, but I am sure this is Mace. You needed to say that Mace was speaking.
4)Be sure to always capitalize the first letter after quotation marks. Ex: "good to see you Vas" - good must be Good.
5) They've been together for TEN months? This is a surprise, and considering that we heard Anakin speaking to Palpatine before in a scene that I remember as being days, but possibly weeks, before this one, I think this is incorrect.
6)This is weird, but you haven't mentioned anything about the clones or the war other than Anakin talking to Palpatine, so it seems that it isn't happening. Of course, maybe these things do not get down to the younglings...
Thanks for another good chapter.

I enjoyed this chapter. The writing has improved a lot and now it is easier to concentrate on the story. I look forward to seeing what is is store for Elizabeth and her master.