wonderful.

aww i loved that it was so sweet that he would have those emotions

LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

One of my favourites!

-Summer

Wow. Absolutely spell-binding.

oh wow this is amazing, it seriously is most definetly the most amazing fanfic i have ever read, you both wrote it beautifully! its amazing! I'm almost speechless!

good story!

very cute vows... incredible story, keep it up

are you gona write more? you have to!

This is such a beautiful story! You guys got the wedding thing down absolutely perfectly! Amazing! Guess what? This is the first story I have in my faves! You guys did an amazing job! Also, please write more. Maybe have it be likehow they fell in love a few years earlier or what happens after they are married HeHe:) I don't care, just PLEASE continue, this is great! *R.P.*

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. I am speechless. The way that described it was just so amazing and astounding. I was in awe throughout the entire story as well as entranced. That was just magnificant. Just ... wow ... "He broke away too soon, shocked when she reached up and pulled him to her." Sigh ... that's my girl. And... They clung to each other, trying to fight off the waves of need and want, both promising to wait until their wedding night to truly become one together. Tonight." Swoon. You describe in such amazing detail and your choice of words is *perfection* I am in awe. I had to stop at least 5 times for a tissue. That was just amazing. I don't care what some ... says ... you both rock this site with amazing fan fiction and that one just blows me away. Please please please write more (Maybe a sequel "the wedding night" ;) Hint hint heidi :) Just kidding) I love it to death and beyond. Thank you for takin time out of your lives to grace us with this fan fiction. "Mr. And Mrs. Tristan DuGrey" Sigh ...

Hey girls! Wanted to shower you all with love once again. :) I may not be a professional writer or know a lot about writing, but this fic is so incredibly breath-taking! I can't even tell you the chills I got while reading it. (Not to mention the crying.) But the chills did it for me...if a story can give me the chills then I know it's amazing! The description is so perfect...I pictured everything happening & felt like I was really there. You two are spectacular and I know you'll be getting tons of awards on Rachie's site! You guys totally need to collaberater again - ASAP! :love: Talk later! Meg :)

I absolutely love this story! You guys put so much detail into every sentence, it's addictive. You have to make this into a series (like the reception, honeymoon,married life, etc). This fic totally made my day. Write soon!

Your descriptions are very good and the story is very sweet. However, your prose is bogged down by lengthy paragraphs, trite cliches, and awkward sentences containing too many big words. (For example: "It’s familiarity anchoring her in the crescendo of emotions coursing through her veins." "She only needed to say the word and he would gather the light of a thousand sunsets to shed their warmth on her delicate skin.") I admire the obvious effort that went into this, but consider making your descriptions lighter and more genuine. Not every noun and verb needs a complicated modifier. Your grammar is good (I only spotted a couple of little mistakes. For example, "site" should be "sight"), although you sometimes use more fragments than necessary to emphasize thoughts. Aside from all those things, your writing is still pleasant to read. Keep up the good work.

YAY! They got married! lol... caffeine and trory stories dont mix well I suppose.

That was great... continue more?

Liz