 Yellowfur 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Hello! I decided to read this parody... although I'm usually not a fan of this type of parody, I rather liked this one. The cast is interesting. I like Starfire and Azula and I especially liked how you gave three males the roles of fairies.
Your spelling and grammar seem fine, so I don't really have anything to give concrit for, which I usually like to do, right now. |