Okayy, I'm only up to Chapter 2, but I'm liking the story already... I like your idea and I definitely think that its going to be an awesome plot.But, I think that creative descriptions on the place, the characters, etc, might add more spark to your writing. This is merely a suggestion. Despite the minor flaw, I still think that its going to be an interesting read. Keep up with the good work. =)

This story is really amazing. I really enjoyed reading your chapters. I am looking forward to reading more. I wish my story was as good as yours. Great work!

What a fantastic story! I am so happy with this! I sincerely hope you update soon!

LadyMage

Oho I wonder what the end was about! And gosh I feel so special :D This was resurrected!! And I'm kind of torn between tyderith and sage because both of them have their flaws (tyderith is typical and.. seems kind of shallow/unspecial and i know it's shallow of me but sage isn't.. good looking :( which i suppose is technically fine cos she's not either but once she's a princess again it would just be so different!) and he's so far from what normal 'heroes' are... so i, as the reader, am a little confused as to who i want celandine to end up with :S and if you add a new character in now i feel like it would be strange? so i suppose I'll just wait to see what you have in store for her.
and i'll keep reading :)

Oh, if you're finishing this story then I'll subscribe to it :D - i had to do it on a chapter that i didn't already review =/
and nps, I find it hard finding good stories on fanfiction sometimes and after I liked your christmas story i went to your profile and read a couple other of your stories. hahaha
oh and btw, I'm LDS too! :)

It finished. I am distraught.
:(

The whole concept was a very interesting idea though I would have liked to see some kind of happily ever after, SOME kind of CONCLUSION at the end of it!

Just wondering if/when prince charming will come or no.. I want him to come and to have the normal happy ending but I feel like if it does happen it will kind of ruin the point of the story... and there's only one chapter left D:
okayokay, enough reviewing, reading!

I knew this would be interesting! You have the most extroverted ideas!! I wonder how this will turn out :)

Interesting developments. I'm very interested in seeing how everything will turn out. :)

wow another red head
u really like to ditch them out in all ur storys
i swear there r more in ur stories than in real life
but despite the over load of red heads i lub the story

I do so love this story! Please continue soon! I'll give you a more elaborate review on the next chapter you put up!

Oh man I am so far behind on all your stories! Cool new pen name, any particular reason for it? :)

Haha Sage, scorin' the ladies. What a Casanova! Poor Cel. I can't make up my mind about the overgrown troll yet. ;) I love your characters as always!

Gosh, it's been a while . . . sorry, Emmy.
I'm suddenly VERY into this story -- I like how C. is clueless to all the sexual innuendo to do with Voya.
So Sage only loves the beautiful girls, eh? Hm . . .
update before I die please thanks,
much love and apology from your Phillie

Rotfl. Oh, the awkwardness. 'Tis very amusing to me. And it's funny how Celandine has trouble with not being the center of attention. Sage is just like several guys I know, so every time he does something I find myself nodding and understanding exactly what image you're creating.

I had nearly forgotten about this story, so I'm glad you updated!!

^Captain

Well gosh! This is hysterical! Quite fun, but Sage isn't really my cup of tea. Should he be? I mean now I almost want her to get back with her fiance. Obviously she's having second thoughts, bu...gee she better change him, cause I'd rather she didn't become very beautiful and have him marry her because of it. Bleh!Cntinue, Piratess, it's wonderful!