Well just quickly update.

you haven't updataed it for a least a yaer I'm sorry but I'm impationt p.s sorry for bad gramer

how much longer!?

can you just answer the why questens sorry for bad gramer.

Great job on it I like it but what is the thing about 3:00 in the morning

i like it so please update as soon as you can.

It's a shame you're rewriting. I'll give you a tip. Tak six hundred words from every chapter. Then every three senetences, eliminate one sentence. Then, when you're done with that you should be left with just a few sentences. Build around those few sentences without moving them around. You can add things in between, before them, and after them. After doing that, you should have a chapter you'll like ^.^ It's a writing exercise I learned in a course I'm taking online.

Wow...I love your description. Gaara is...well, interesting to say the least. i've never really encountered a story that captured my attention the way this one did. Great job!

thank you for the review and i relized when i was done typing my story was a little out of it. I plan on rewriting it so it can fit the theme in my head. Plus i know the characters well. Im just trying to make neji the submissive one in the story, but its to hard. I would appreciate a few tips. Thank you and your story is great.

Remus Lupin Gaara 3:00 in the morning this

^-^ OMG. I started busting out when I read that. Its a wonder the type of things we dream up at 3 in the morning.

I like the story so far, good plot.

- The Book of Counted Sorrows

Hey, whatever. I'll wait for it. Anything to see Gaara with doggy ears... :3 lol. Don't feel too bad about it... XD

as long as you keep it good

^^ It is ok, Shaedey. We will wait. Just, tell us when you re-write the series - I wanna read it!

NO! (dies)

(comes back) WRITE FASTER! MORE! UPDDAATTE!(dies again)

P-poor Gaara! And with the bite...is Neji going to turn now? OI! I need to keep reading! I loved the chapter!