Wow, that was intense. Nice job, I can see Dante reacting like that. Also, I loved the way you wrote it, it flowed well and sounded beautiful. Although, in the last sentence, I thought it sounded as if Lady was indifferent to the situation. That may just be me. Good job again :)

*sob* So sad. You're really good at this angsty stuff.

Once again, I enjoyed the story... I could actually put myself in Dante's shoes and feel the blade twisting inside. Very few stories could really bring me to the point of tears. Great Job Luce!

I loved the way you worked the emotional angle of this story.

Small edit: "He was a dead man and by god did he know it." It should be *knew* it.

You should call it For Love To End.

Well thanks my idea.
Good story by the way.

Aw that was so sad ;-;

Wow your an amazing writter (warning I can't spell) I love the wording u used! Sorry but I can't give name suggestion I can hardly name my own stories. You really need to keep writting DMC fics (thats one of the best in a while) I personally think that will never happen though. Lady addmitted at the end of DMC3 that there is good demons. (or maybe I just tell myself that because I don't want Dante to ever die but...) I better stop blabbing GREAT STORY! I'm off to read more of your amazing work (if you have any more) Good luck on future stories!

You've writen a wonderful story! Very heartfelt.You captured the characters well.I almost shed a tear for poor Lady.

That, was sad. Wouldn't just be a kick to the just if he ended up as a pawn in some evil dark plan of some evil dark lord? A lifeless puppet used to distract Lady? Anyhow, let's see, a title...

Of bitter-sweet tears and broken good-byes?

Setting me free?

Poisoned kiss and shattered hearts?

Rain of sorrow?

What could never be?

Yes I am making these up off the top of my head...hope that helps.

Makai

so sad but maybe that's how dante wanted to die by someone he loved that by a demon

Dude... that made me cry! I've never cried while reading a fanfic before! lol

I loved this beyond words. It seemed too perfect for its own good. You put us other writers to shame! And you've made me curious, so I'm off to see if you've written anything else.

My only advice is to spellcheck, but we all make mistakes and they were so small I barely noticed. Other than that, promise to write more! You definiately have the talent. Best of luck!