Reviews for In Explanation

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Yami Val 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseLeon is Paul's son! Never saw that coming!! Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what will happen next!! I love Egyptian Bakura though!! He is awesome!! Please update as soon as you can!! I love this story!! I can't wait to see what will happen to all of them!! Luv ya
dragonlady222 2008-05-09 ch 16,	abuseGood chapter. I wonder if it Paul or Leon that is the leak. They put a lot of trust in him. I hope they all get out of this alive.
dragon sethi 2008-05-08 ch 16, anon.	abusehm..I think I already told u this nd all but still going to tell I LOVED IT! nd do update soon as soon as you have time. ^_^
barrie18 2008-05-08 ch 16,	abuseMy little brain is getting very confused. I've gone over this chapter several times and keep thinking I'm missing something. Someone rang Leon's phone. But was the phone even answered? And what plan does Leon have and why would he want it to work on Mahado & Yami? Is he the double agent, programed to work against his father (and would Paul even realize that this is his son?) Or have the DNA samples been falsified? And what kind of 'spy' is Mahado to lose his keys so casually, especially when you are on a mission. And where is Leon? On the less serious side. . . What the heck was Egyptian Bakura wearing? Just a loin cloth? Interesting chapter, hope to see some answers next time around. Looking forward to the next update.
Yamira-Allerue 2008-05-06 ch 2,	abuse.LOL I thought Kaiba would yell at Yami or something. Guess I was wrong... well, that's good anyways ^^ .Routine, lol. At home we have a routine too. Someone would wake up early, someone would wake up late. Then the roles would interchange. IT'S MAD REALLY. .Mokuba's... a college guy now? LOL WOW. .YAMI YOU HAVE TO SLEEP. YOUR EYES WILL GET EYEBAGS. EYEBAGS ARE NOT PRETTY. AND YOU'RE PRETTY. /KNOW YOUR PRIORITIES, MAN!/ XD .next chappie!
Yamira-Allerue 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuse.HI ANGST-MINDTWIN! .SUPER AMAZING! YAMI IS A SECRET AGENT!! I KNEW IT! Someone as pretty as HIM couldn't be a normal person, lmao... .lol I like the name Paul. It's so... cool XD .Am gonna review the next chappie nao
dragonlady222 2008-05-01 ch 15,	abuseThings are heating up. I wonder who the phone call was from. I don't trust Paul for some reason. I hope he is not the mole. Bakura better be careful with Seto who knows what kind of trouble that will be. Good chapter.
dragon-l-sethi 2008-04-29 ch 15, anon.	abusegot bored to login so doing it this way.. apathy san I found you and a brilliant story and loved it and do update son and see ya around in Fragile Balance.
Yami Val 2008-04-29 ch 15,	abuseGood chapter!! The suspense is killing me!! Funny though when Bakua said aren't you supposed to be spending time with the priest and Yami said Mahado!! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next so please update soon! Luv ya
barrie18 2008-04-28 ch 15,	abuseHope to see you update soon, so that the questions from this chapter might be answered. And there are lots of questions. What was said to Paul? Who rang Seto? Is Yami going to use the Puzzle. (which would probably send him back to the Shadows.) And is Yami going to cheat on Seto or be put into a situation where he has to cheat on him to save the others? hm now there's a thought for you with alot of angst. Great chapter - looking forward to the next one.
kiki2222 2008-04-28 ch 15,	abusei love the chapter
Tragedyluver 2008-04-10 ch 14,	abuseYour chapter was absolutely and positively AWESOME!! Poor Yami. His life does suck. T__T Perhaps one day it will get better. (hopeful look.) Anyways, great chapter and I'm dying to know what happens next! -Tragedyluver
Yami Val 2008-04-10 ch 14,	abuseThanks for the dedication!! I'm glad you like my stories though!! Anyway I loved this chapter. Poor Yami he has been through so much. I really feel bad for him and on top of everything Seto gets shot!! I wonder where the Millennium Puzzle comes in to play in this, if it does, but that scene actually brought a tear to my eye!! Very, very good! I hope our favorite CEO is alright! Please, Please update soon!!
dragonlady222 2008-04-09 ch 14,	abuseGood chapter. I hope the puzzle will help Yami out. he needs help and to stop blaming himself for everything.
sliders245 2008-03-14 ch 13,	abuseGood Chapter! and keep updating!

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