Nice story, made laugh... but it was confusing as to when the ages changed... but I figured it out in the end I think.

Buffy

That was really good. I loved how each of the chapters focused on the different relationships between all four of them. And I love how you wrote this chapter with each of their veiwpoints.

The food fight, the principals office, the treehouse and the end, it was very cool to read.

I also loved how you showed in the end the things that they all share in common, the different relationships I mean.

I loved the way you explored their friendship. You did a wonderful job. Can't wait to read more from you.

Hey.

That was so cute! I love it. They're all so different, yet they were such good friends. It was a very realistic view of how they formed their little group.

Very good.

Cheers,

~Mellie~

Great final chapter and great story overall, I've loved reading it so much :D

Hey there!

It's a nice view of how these guys became friends. They're all so different! *grins*

Anyway, I really liked it. I could really see a young Chip and mini Vida over there. ;]

It was great.

Cheers,

~Mellie~

I loved this one. I really like how you got Vida and Xander talking, they would be the hardest ones to become friends and I think you did it realistically.

I love how Chip and Madison set it up so it could happen.

Great chapter, can't wait for the next chapter.

Great chapter, though some of the spelling and grammar was incorrect so I found it hard to read in places. Apart from that, it was a really enjoyable chapter so please update soon :)

Good chapter, can't wait to see where this is heading :) Please update soon!

Thank you for updating.

You did a great job. I know how that is trying to write the character you have a hard time with, happens to me too. :) But I think you did a pretty good job.

I like how you had Madison and Xander working together so she can see what Chip was talking about. I think they really flowed well together.

I love how they both showed what they were into. I wonder what the project is going to be...

Anyways, thanks so much for updating and congrats on the two awards, that's awesome, and I can totally see why you would have the wins. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I like this stiory alot i luv Power Rangers : Mystic Force Chip and V r my favorite characters wat r urs?

aw, cute. Write more!

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angellwings

Neat, Keep it up^_^

I love it! It's so cute and fluffy

That was cute. I like how Xander's first one to become friends with was Chip.

I really liked their talk and your explanation of things.

Good chapter.

i am starting to like this tory update soon