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Eve Jackson
2007-06-30 . chapter 1
I would like to see this one continue!
*waits patiently*
Thanks! :)
Eve
chiclete
2007-06-16 . chapter 1
Poor Jack!! Really weird. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
E. Nagrom
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
hey this is fantastic :) cant wait 4 more

E.
gibblesgal
2007-06-13 . chapter 1
So, Jack is talking to himself and nobody can see his likeness. This is kind of spookey. I really feel for Jack through the words you have written. He is lost within himself without recourse. He doesn't know who to trust. Tell us more.
7 League Boots
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
Wow. That's some bizarro trip for poor Jack! Very original, very thoughtful. Jack's character is well drawn, and Daniel is a great friend here. Surprised that Sam isn't more involved in figuring out his malady esp since some type of technology was employed, but then again Janet is certainly on the case! Love to see how this turns out. Does Turner really care, and will Edrin (royal brat!) find out he's helping Jack? The humming sounds intriguing; will Jack humm, too? Please continue. Glad you decided to post this story.
Neiths Arrow
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
I enjoyed it and hope you continue. It is intriguing. Please post more.
not a zatarc
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
Odd, but in a good way. It's interesting so far. :)
pain in the mikta
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
Intriguing and riveting! Me wants to know how you will "fix" Jack! Write more, ASAP! Pretty please?
skycross
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
You're fic is intersting. Stange! but interesting. I hope I will have again the pleasure to read you're next chapter soon.
isabel
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
Great start, I really want to know what happens next:please post ASAP!
PatriciaS
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
Interesting story, guess Jack's going to have a bit of difficulty explaining his other Jack away.
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