 Eve Jackson 2007-06-30 . chapter 1I would like to see this one continue!
*waits patiently*
Thanks! :)
Eve |
 chiclete 2007-06-16 . chapter 1Poor Jack!! Really weird. Can't wait for the next chapter!! |
 E. Nagrom 2007-06-13 . chapter 1hey this is fantastic :) cant wait 4 more
E. |
 gibblesgal 2007-06-13 . chapter 1So, Jack is talking to himself and nobody can see his likeness. This is kind of spookey. I really feel for Jack through the words you have written. He is lost within himself without recourse. He doesn't know who to trust. Tell us more. |
 7 League Boots 2007-06-12 . chapter 1Wow. That's some bizarro trip for poor Jack! Very original, very thoughtful. Jack's character is well drawn, and Daniel is a great friend here. Surprised that Sam isn't more involved in figuring out his malady esp since some type of technology was employed, but then again Janet is certainly on the case! Love to see how this turns out. Does Turner really care, and will Edrin (royal brat!) find out he's helping Jack? The humming sounds intriguing; will Jack humm, too? Please continue. Glad you decided to post this story. |
 Neiths Arrow 2007-06-11 . chapter 1I enjoyed it and hope you continue. It is intriguing. Please post more. |
 not a zatarc 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Odd, but in a good way. It's interesting so far. :) |
 pain in the mikta 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Intriguing and riveting! Me wants to know how you will "fix" Jack! Write more, ASAP! Pretty please? |
 skycross 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 You're fic is intersting. Stange! but interesting. I hope I will have again the pleasure to read you're next chapter soon. |
 isabel 2007-06-11 . chapter 1 Great start, I really want to know what happens next:please post ASAP! |
 PatriciaS 2007-06-11 . chapter 1Interesting story, guess Jack's going to have a bit of difficulty explaining his other Jack away. |