Hi. I like the story and especially the way Helana giggled.

The only bit I didn't like was the bit where you said:
"Victor sank down onto his bed and laid back. He could not be bothered to undress; he was too tired for that. He smiled. He lit a cigar and puffed contently and smiled. He saw an old book and picked it up."

Apart from that I think it was great!

This is so beautiful, especially the last line Victor has always been my favorite.
Keep up the good work

I think Bergman was my favourite character too – he seemed so human and vulnerable! A lovely tribute to poor Barry Morse - he will be sadly missed
quiller