I think you got the priori incantatem order wrong; didn't Callie die before Harry's parents? As I recall, Sirius found her body outside of the Potter house which seems to indicate that she died while trying to keep Voldemort out; it doesn't make sense that she could have been killed by Voldemort after he became a disembodied spirit.

WEll i hope you able to continue this is a good series. You have followed cannon for the most part with only a few new characters and different attitudes for the most part so hopeflly you can get the fith story out sometime.

Heres waiting for more from you on this series take care and keep up the good work

Just read your Harry Potter the Darkness series. Loved it

Hope you get over your block soon, good twist. look forward to it continuing

Awesome story

Can't wait for the next one :D

hey I just wanted to tell you what a awesome job you did with the Harry Potter and the Darkness saga. I really like the couple Harry Hermione and i like what you did with Draco and Ron. Your four stories were just great and i'm hoping that you decide to continue with it. Thanks for the fanfics.

I have 2 problems with this chapter. 1 major problem is Molly. Why is she in the hospital with everyone and questioning Harry. OMG...you portray her as a bitch, delusional hag and yet she is allowed to be in the hospital and on top of that question Harry? I don't care how pushy she is, she should not have been there!

2...In the first year you had Harry in Dumbledore's office talking about the blood wards and Harry stated to Dumbledore that unless he thought of that place as his home the blood wards would not work...why do you have Dumbledore pushing this?

A major stupid flaw. Since she used the time turner and is considered "older" and more mature then to me she is just stupid. Oh well.

I wanted to say that I have really enjoyed how you are showing Percy in a way that is not very often seen. I love how you have developed his character and made him noble. :)

Now to Ron...I was really ticked in the earlier "years" how much he was involved since you had stated he would be a background character...but I just want to say that its not been as bad as I thought. He will never be my favorite character, but I can handle him as you have written him, there but not really totally involved. Kudos to you. :)

Ouch...major OUCH...Mia has feelings for Hunter, has a True Love necklace that shows her he is her true love and at the end of this chapter she is kissing another guy. Doesn't matter if its Cedric...do you know what that makes her? Why, why, why, why would you even write a scene like this into your story? She says she doesn't want to have a relationship with any guys and I know girls/women can change their minds at drop of a hat but this? Sorry...I read your a/n and thought hmmm whats up with the ending...yeah...I don't like it either and truthfully I can't see where it would be needed for later chapters as you state...and as it looks like the story has not been updated for 3 years, I'm sure we will never know. All it does is cause you to have a name added to yourself and hurt feelings all the way around.

I am really, really enjoying your story...but I don't like how you have Hermione being so useless. Crying all the time, clinging to Harry and afraid to let him go...this is not Hermione...she needs to be more like your Mia character...take names and kick zz. I love the romance you have between Harry/Hermione...that is awesome! :)

I have to say I'm a bit miffed at this chapter. Hermione is one of the elements...she has been training now for 2 years...she was told she would be fighting and killing Death Eaters because they don't shoot spells to stun but to kill. So where was Hermione when all the fighting was going down and what was up with her disappearing via portkey? This chapter bites...big time. :(

Soni am like 3 years late in finding and reading this series but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed it! It has been a hole since I have read something that I have enjoyed and bothered writing a review...

Anyways I just wanted to thank you for an awesome series... Not to mentionyour other stories are awesome too! I find it so interesting reading the different ideas creativty and point of views from other authors!

Anyways thanks a bunch! I know you may or may not continue the series but for what it was worth, it was a great one! Haha at least in my opinion.

Anyways I think that I have babbled enough. I will let this end. I hope that you have a great day!

i've really enjoyed this series so far, and it's great to see an au series that the author has actually kept up with, not gotten bored half way through 1st year and abandoned it. hope you can post the next one soon!

oh my GOD continue with the sequel i absolutely love it

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