this is a great story..please continue soon!

I just have to comment on you quirky sence of humor. I enjoy it! Cute convo that Ash had.

Cute story so far, write more!

your writing a realy good story so far, but did you have to make it a cliff hanger. i hate cliff hangers. you always have to wait in suspens to find out what happens next. its so anoying!

Please type more! This was so great and I love it when Ash can never get the words out when they need to be out in the open. PLEASE more!

i really was glad 2 see a fan fiction i could actually finish. i've been looking through all the g rated fics and they all cuss! hello! what do people think g rated means! but you didn't and i really appreciate that as a reader. thanx!

big headed kid... bwahaha... ok, umm.. continue, really good, and uh... continue! o_O;

GREAT FIC! :)

GET HER ASH YOU MORON! GET YOUR SLIMY BUTT OVER TEIR AND APOLOGIZE! *Deep breath* I'm ok! I'm just a Littel hyper, can you tell? Anyway, please continue!

awww...you've got to finish this! i really want to know what happens next! i can't believe ash is being such a spoiled brat! don't make him look too bad...

Awwww poor Ash and Misty! GAH! GO AFTER HER YOU MORON! *I'm ok*

He ORDERED her to stay? And apparently Misty turned and used her dragon rage attack on poor Ash! Time's limited, so get to writing already! Looking forward to chapter 3...

Well, firstly, ENJOY your vacation, Lady Cassandra!

And I hope to read more of this fic...Misty appears to be getting her act together, but Ash is another story...

i can seriously see Misty running like a chicken with her head cut off packing! hehehe sorry thats just what it reminded me of..._ love it!

He'll probably take it **, who wouldn' then again, he could also understand why she has to leave but that doesn't mean he won't be heartbroken.*sigh* life's confusing at times and a total b*tch most of the time.I guess it's all up to you, you can make him understand or you can make him heartbroken(he's gonna be heartbroken anyway, so I don't see the difference).

But you can also(which I hope you won't do)make him look as a complete jerk and destroy their that would be a b* , it's a good story, but please stop with the cliffhangers!(_)