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mj0621
2007-07-06
ch 6,
abuseaw.. i almost wanted to poke mac there XD
lovely updates...

ooH! yeah ff upgraded the site so alot has been happening... *shrugs* but hey im not complaining! we can finally put icons in our profiles! lol

btw, heard the latest spoilers in s4? im sure youre gonna love it ;)

-mj(wgf)
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-28
ch 6,
abuseAw!! They got back together!


Will you give us an eiplogue?? ;o) hehehehehe






LOVED IT!


~mandi *_*
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-28
ch 5,
abuseWow Stella...talk about dropping the bomb on him. LoL!





Just listen to him!! Don't be ** with him! You know you still love him too...




LOVE IT!

~mandi *_*
CCWaT
2007-06-27
ch 6,
abuseGood story. Like the end :)
Hope you'll post the All Access Story soon.
Maybe you'll write later a (I don't know if it's called like this) sequel, if Stella gets a girl or boy and if the marry or so :)
bubble-rouge08
2007-06-26
ch 6,
abuseHey!

I like the premise of the story -- with Mac going away without consulting Stella first; the two of them in a relationship and all that.

It's just a little fast... and OOC. But other than that, it's good.
PastMyShoulder
2007-06-25
ch 6,
abuseShe smiles mischievously. “Never done it in a hotel room before.” ROFL ROFL :D Awesome story
Murgy31
2007-06-24
ch 6,
abuseGreat Chapter! It was good to see Mac grovel a little bit!
PastMyShoulder
2007-06-22
ch 5,
abusem I love it ! Interesting and romantic story :D I want more more more ;)
Dakota Storm
2007-06-22
ch 5,
abuseomg she told him!! Well now that he knows eather he'll want to stay or Stella will be bloody stubborn again and not want he to be there. Great chapter cant wait for the next part...
Murgy31
2007-06-21
ch 5,
abuseI love this chapter! She can be stubborn can't she?
mj0621
2007-06-21
ch 4,
abusewoot! another SMacked kid!
nice. :D
i think Macky will do anything for his kid...
he should come back and fix where he screwed... wait that sounded wrong... :P you get my point anyway :D

-mj(wgf)
Murgy31
2007-06-20
ch 4,
abuseGreat Chapter! Bad, bad Mac for leaving Stella. I hope that they work it all out.
AliasCSINYFriendsER
2007-06-20
ch 4,
abuseAw!! Stella's pregnant with a SMack baby! LoL



I think she should tell him.


Now they're both being stupid and stubborn. *crosses arms and pouts* LOL!




LOVE IT! More soon!



~mandi *_*
Dakota Storm
2007-06-20
ch 4,
abuseHopefully Stella will forget about Mac now, I'm glade she's pregnant, i'm so happy for her. Can't wait for the next chapter
mj0621
2007-06-19
ch 3,
abuse*tsk tsk tsks Macky*
...
*slaps Macky at the back of his head*
...
*pokes Macky*
...
...men... -_-;

good danny! stand up to him and tell him whats he's gonna lose!
*hugs stella*

-mj(wgf)
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