I love it!

The descriptions were good, and I love this pairing. You have a knack for making certains important sentences memorable, while not divulging their entire meaning.

Amazing. :)

Great sense of pathos. Keep writing!

I love it! its very emotional. please update soon!

Hm... very interesting. :D

I like it! ^_^

I loved it! You gonna do any more chapters?
To be honest, I didn't really understand it. =.= The part about how the sun never shines in hell? Could you tell me what Hanabi meant?
And you've made me realise something. My inspirations come in flashes as well, only in order to EXPRESS them i usually end up constructing a whole story, again and again, for each one. It's a bit tiring and kinda boring, so Im gonna take a leaf out of your book. :)
I think this fic, like all of yours, is VERY beautifully written ^^

wow! nice story~
i'm loving the storyline so far

Oo this is good. I do hope you continue.

Insanely beautiful. Your way of writing emotions is incredible; I find myself being entranced by it as my heart breaks in a different place by mere sentences. I'm very surprised this fic hasn't been discovered or given the publicity it deserves.
I wish you to do more, hm? I'd love you to death if you do.
I'll put this on story alert, just in case.
-Riiku-Senpai ♥

Hi! *^_^*
sorry i took such a long time to review, i haven't had internet access for the past three weeks. But anyway, i completely understand what you intend when you say the story is more meant to be felt. I definitely get that from it, but i wanted to tell you i feel like it's kind of plot driven too since you're moving in through moments of drama quickly. Anyway, very...liquid chapter, it flows well.

Beautiful...PURE BRILLIANCE! Actually, its too amazing for words to discribe, so i'll try not embarass myself trying to come up with words from the top of my head. This is acutally better than the crud that high schools force you to read in order to graduate.

^0^

I never thought I could be intrigued by a story that is set out to be aloof (although that's not really the word I'm looking for..."aloof" gives it a bad connotation and that's not what I mean at all. I meant in the sense that it's not tied down to any particular direction) but that's just me being obsessive compulsive about...well, everything. And yet, I liked this so very much, I really hope you go on with it. Even if the pairing is not popular (I'd honestly never even considered, but you know what? The more I think about it, the more I like it) it's great writing, if anything. Anyway, enough with my rambling, what I originally meant to say was "good job!" so I'll leave it at that =)

wow this was really well written! I LOVE this story, the plot is awesome!!

continue please?

DCM

very inspiring. when i read this, i just feel like i should be writing.

it does feel like snapshoots...little steps. little moments being weaved into a big...blanket.

sorry, my if english sucks.

but please continue with this fic. it has an incredible quality and it is worth reading. (my english may suck, but reading...i have always master it!)

i like the slowness and how everything is odd, sad and very human.

Ooh, this scene is so painful. It's almost hard to read about Kiba's suffering, and Hanabi's apparent indifference.

I found KibaHanabi entirely through your stories, and I love how you write them. This story feels like it will be especially poignant, and I love it. And I agree with you--the actions happening are less of a concern than the feelings they evoke. We only need to know the basics to understand why and how.

Well, at least for Kiba. His feelings are left much wider open, and are much easier for me to grasp. Hanabi's are...never explicitly revealed, which I find perfect for her character. She is, as she states, the Hyuuga heiress.

Wonderful job. I hope to read more soon.

Lovely as bone turned to ivory.