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xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abuseterrible
xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 1,
abuseso u assume sex is important in a relationship? well at least they've been goin out 4 a while.
xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abuseur embarassing urself.
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abuseno wonder your fanfictions suck, you have a terrible gpa.
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abuseand what was the point of that? boring and terrible lemon, if you could even call it that.
don't write a lemon until you experince good sex.
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 1,
abusebecause sex is what relationships are all about.
Personally, of the two general attitudes of the sexes, I disagree with the traditional female attitude the most. This is because I firmly believe it is neither logical nor realistic. After all, Sex is a PHYSICAL act. Having a man's ** inside of you is a purely physical thing. Many women attempt to make sex something that it is not: the spark to an emotional bonding experience. Many women try to CREATE some sort of "deep, emotional connection" by using the "Sex Weapon." This is stupid, because the logic behind it is flawed and because it simply doesn't work. Your boyfriend isn't going to feel more emotionally connected to you because of a few moments of erotic bliss. (As far as you know, he is physically ** you BUT mentally ** Carmen Electra.) Emotional connections do not come from sex. Emotional connections do not form over night. You do not wake up one day emotionally unconnected to someone, ** them, and then fall asleep emotionally bonded forever. At most, this man is just another number to add to your now long list of men you have ** in an attempt to form an emotional bond. It would be nice for females if emotional connections formed the instant a man put his ** inside of them, but it simply doesn't work like that. Emotional connections form over time. One act of sexual intimacy is not going to turn that "emotional connetion" trigger on in your boyfriend's head. Emotional connections are a lot deeper than just physical intimacy. A guy has to actually like YOU, not just your ** and boobs, to form an emotional connection with you. After all, your boyfriend isn't ** your personality, he is ** your body. Be honest with yourself, what is REALLY so emotionally bonding about getting naked and touching each others private parts? I can promise you now that if you attempt to use your ** as a way to forge an emotional bond with your boyfriend, you are going to fail MISERABLY. So do yourself a favor, and DO NOT have sex with this intention.

Now, before people call me out on this and say that what I said is false because they have some romantic, intimate emotional bond that proves that what I said is simply not true, let me clarify what I mean. What I am trying to illustrate here is that, while emotional connections can make sex have a "deeper" meaning for both males and females alike, sex itself will NOT be the way through which that emotional connection is created. The key to this is that the emotional connection has to exist before the sex occurs for the sex to be meaningful. The sex itself is not capable of making a guy who doesn't give half a ** about you fall madly in love with you. If this emotional connection is not present before the sex, then the actual act of sex will be 100% purely pleasure based. This is the reality of the situation. Don't fool yourself.
Mate-of-Sesshy
2007-10-31
ch 2,
abuse...wow i could never write this yet i can read this update soon no asap please and thank u ^-^
Blane Hoshi
2007-08-04
ch 2,
abuseXD i loved how u did the first part XD it was so funny
konohaninmiharuchan
2007-06-21
ch 2,
abusenice

never knew you would write a lemon...

haha

don't worry i read these a lot

shh...
Sakura LOVE shadow
2007-06-17
ch 2,
abuseThat's it? AW why the cliffie?
Emo-Brittanica
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abusehow dare you leave a chappie that good, but so short. You betta continue, or else im coming after you. You'd never see it coming. Good story
Michiru
2007-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseOkay! Sorry about this, but...WTF? You can do way better! You probably lack confidence like me! Come on! You're off to a good start, don't stop! Make it up in Chapter 2! Trust me! I know you can do it! I love printing off copies of this kind of stuff and reading it over and over again! I've got two file cases filled with smut! Their ** would make your stomach tighten just by reading the disclaimers! Come on! Do it! I swear I won't criticize you on chapter 2, but you've got to admit, it is kind of puny for a oneshot! I suggest you go to and check out all the awesome smut! You'll be inspired! Believe it! ~Courtesy of Naruto~ BTW: If you can, write back to me when you feel like it or get the chance! Sorry again! I don't mean to be harsh, but you've got talent, and you know it! So put it to good use and start another chapter! You'll be glad you did! See-Ya! ^_^
66XANDER66
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseawesome summary and plz update
Mr. Norris
2007-06-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseVery touching. But, why rated M.
Sakura LOVE shadow
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abuseUpdate soon i wanna read a great lemon!! CHA!!
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