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| Erin Cade 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseHehe, this was fun. Yay, I love it when people use Dutch in their stories, 'cause that's one language ((apart from english)) that I can under stand! Hehe :P |
| countrygal304 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseahahaha. very funny. i loved the part when ponyboy crashed into the wall. |
| Rachael 2007-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abusedally shooting her at the end was seriously the icing on the cake. I hate mary-sue's. |
| Talulah-Bear 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusehaha...that was funny. it made me laugh especially when she died. |
| Erin Ray 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusehaha. cute. |
| Flag 2007-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWere you wired when you wrote this? Drunk? High? Being pulled into a bottomless pit by a column of smoke? Either way, good job. |
| xodamhsoirxo 2007-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL that was wicked funny. We have an od sense of humor, there wasn't supposed to be so many d's in that but I didn't want to backspace them. |
| xlestrangex 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abusethis was so funny. usually i dont like storys that make fun of mary-sues, but this made me giggle:D |