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Reviews for: Escaping the Past
DemonCiel 7/14/11 . chapter 4
First of all, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! I love it :)

It's very well written and I like the plot so far, definitely deserves more reviews/readers

And also, on chapter 2 you introduce Gaara into the story, buuuuut you misspelled "desert" (you wrote it with two s's (Ss, Esses S'... How am I supposed to write it? TTTT)

It's just a little typo, and I though that was funny xD

... I even made a picture...:

/d3re9t0

Do links work in reviews? I don't know, but here's a separated version just in case:

d3re9t0
XxXxFading DreamxXxX 8/12/09 . chapter 4
Wow this is a really good story, i hope you continue!

Update soon please! -
blugirlami21 8/25/08 . chapter 4
I really like this, I love when Sasuke and Naruto have an instant connection, it just moves things along much more quickly, relationship wise. Every other character intro has been spot on and the backstory of Gaara, Naruto, and Kyuubi is really interesting. Naruto being a closet fashion designer is also interesting, that's something I have never seen before and it will be intriguing to see where you will go with that. I also wonder if Kyuubi will be making an appearance in this story. Anyway I loved the first four chaps and I hope you update soon.
watchingthecloudsgoby 8/23/08 . chapter 4
Aw, cute. good chapter. Can't wait to see what happens.
coworly 6/12/08 . chapter 3
The narusasu thing seems to be moving rather fast. I guess that's love at first sight. XD Sounds interesting so far. Do you plan on continuing it?
Sun Knight 6/1/08 . chapter 3
great story so far please update soon i'd love to read more
digiMist 12/28/07 . chapter 3
This is an amazing story. It is sad that you haven't updated in a while, though. I love Naruto's character and Gaara quiting because of Naruto was excellent. Please try and write another chapter!
Ariel1029 12/22/07 . chapter 3
OMG! I love this story so far it is amazing PLEASE WRITE MORE... PLEASE!
Pirate Bo 10/12/07 . chapter 3
Bo: heehee. I like it! XD

Ski: me two! I like how we got a peak at Naru-chan's background! cna't wait to see more of it!
nellie330 9/28/07 . chapter 3
nice!

nellie
RoyalJamboree 7/24/07 . chapter 3
UPDATE!
Tioman 7/7/07 . chapter 3
awsome!
spinefire 6/24/07 . chapter 2
I like it! You only had a few grammer and spelling mistakes. A Beta could help you with that...

Anyway, I can't wait for the update! _
RoyalJamboree 6/15/07 . chapter 2
how did you only have one reveiw? this story is fucking awsome so you beter fucking continue!

*eyes unglaze*

sorry, please update though
SupernaturalCreaturesChick04 6/13/07 . chapter 2
what happens to naruto who is they and what is so bad about gaara?
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