great reiteration of the story. would like you to continue

Great story, can't wait to read more :)

Oooh that's gotta burn, also, haven't you skipped the hunting scene, or is this one an original event.

All that aside this wonderful piece of fiction is really truly driving home the tragedy of the Hawks destruction. I don't whether or not to thank you for that but I should surely thank you for writing something as good as this.

Well done, I look forward to more.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

Pretty good story, interesting to take it from Caska's perspective instead of Guts. I'd like to read more, so I'll set it to notify me if you post another chapter. Hope to see more soon.

Hello,

I have just read chapters one and two of the Chronicles of Caska, and I have to say, even though I know the future of this character (and it breaks my heart), I find this an amazing read. Your writing style offers up a great female perspective to the Berserk story. Although it offers a slightly more feminine Caska than I remember, but your use of grammar, detail and context are great and even though the end is a tenticled, mind raping nightmare, I look forward to reading up to it.

You have been faved. haha,

SonRyu

Nice job1 I love it! It reminds me "Mist of Avalon" where the King Arthur's legend is seen by women's eyes. Hope to read more of your work until the Eclipe comes...

And again... Congratulations.

Alcaudon.

What an excellently written chapter Ninalee-chan. The words you used to describe each scene were simply flawless, as they set the mood so well. Caska's confusion of Griffith and Gutts friendship, as well as her feelings of envy, are all depicted so well in your words. Great job once again, it was well-worth the wait!

Amazing writing. That's all i can say. You're very good at this.

Seems interesting so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Hm, another great chapter and again, kudos on your characterization. There's not much I can say about this one, being that there were no spelling errors or anything. I did, however, manage to suppress a laugh at the scene of Caska decking Gatts with that punch. Again, you've managed to capture her conflicting feelings so well.

She wants to support Griffith in any decision he makes, that much we know. But she also can't help but feeling a sense of inferiority to Gatts, because he's so close to Griffith. It'll be interesting to see how you write the upcoming chapters, where things play out even further and become even more complicated.

Great chapter Nita-sempai! I can't believe I never reviewed this one before! *Sighs* I'm so ashamed of myself. Moving on, what I liked best was, once again, your ability to get inside the character's minds. Though you've spilled the secret, it's still a wonder to see even now. Your detail about Caska's conflicting thoughts at this time were very well-done, as was Gatts "tough guy" bravado. Bravo, Nita, bravo!

Very good as always! I think you really captured the mixture of warrior and woman in Casca. Like she's really strong but still shows emotions. I'm wondering... I know it's a long way off... but what do you plan to do after the Eclipse?

Nice! I love this series! I can't wait for the chapters AH! Thanks for such a great idea! 5 Stars

Yay new chapter great story and even more of a need for chapter four keep it up Ninalee-Chan!

Once again great writing and characterization. As always you capture Caska very well. But... when do we get to the good stuff? *wangs eyebrows* Sorry it's the shipper in me ;