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Reviews For: Ten Days

HinataxNarutofan
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abuseHazel and Jay...odd pairing, but good story!
Typhoid-Candy
2007-10-03
ch 1,
abuseHah! I loved it. It was very nice and funny.

You should write more Jayzel's (is that what you call them?). You're really talented.

:D
bohemianxx
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseI've never actually read a Jayzel and I've never actually thought of them as a pairing.

But there's a first time for everything, right?

Really loved it. You captured them perfectly and the style and format was real nice. Great job!
Tiki Sixx
2007-08-07
ch 1,
abuseThis was really cute -- it's definitely an odd pairing, but you somehow were able to make it work. Not to mention you captured Jay's character perfectly.

I loved it -- great work, and thanks for the good read. :]
EndlessDreamer1024
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was interesting. I liked it. There arent many Jayzel stories on here and this was a good one, well I think they're all good. Too bad it's a one shot, I'd like to see how their relationship unfolds.
little-nightmare
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abusedude. you just put the oddest, most un thought of pairing together and totally made it work. i'm in awe. kick ass job!
DyingStar
2007-06-19
ch 1,
abuseI liked this. I thought you had both Hazel and Jay's characterization down pact, AND I really dug the whole story line. The look into the ten days spent with the devil's advocate and a pampered pretty girl was a real cool idea. Nice job!

PS--I always sorta had a soft spot for Jay...I think people judge him way too harshly :p
Richi03
2007-06-12
ch 1,
abuseI'm usually not a big Jay/Hazel fan, but this was actually pretty realistic and I loved your writing style. I can't wait to read more from you :)
flowersinthespringtime
2007-06-11
ch 1,
abuseI totally loved this. it was so cute. I never actually thought of them as a couple!
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