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| HinataxNarutofan 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseHazel and Jay...odd pairing, but good story! |
| Typhoid-Candy 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseHah! I loved it. It was very nice and funny. You should write more Jayzel's (is that what you call them?). You're really talented. :D |
| bohemianxx 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseI've never actually read a Jayzel and I've never actually thought of them as a pairing. But there's a first time for everything, right? Really loved it. You captured them perfectly and the style and format was real nice. Great job! |
| Tiki Sixx 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cute -- it's definitely an odd pairing, but you somehow were able to make it work. Not to mention you captured Jay's character perfectly. I loved it -- great work, and thanks for the good read. :] |
| EndlessDreamer1024 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was interesting. I liked it. There arent many Jayzel stories on here and this was a good one, well I think they're all good. Too bad it's a one shot, I'd like to see how their relationship unfolds. |
| little-nightmare 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abusedude. you just put the oddest, most un thought of pairing together and totally made it work. i'm in awe. kick ass job! |
| DyingStar 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. I thought you had both Hazel and Jay's characterization down pact, AND I really dug the whole story line. The look into the ten days spent with the devil's advocate and a pampered pretty girl was a real cool idea. Nice job! PS--I always sorta had a soft spot for Jay...I think people judge him way too harshly :p |
| Richi03 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm usually not a big Jay/Hazel fan, but this was actually pretty realistic and I loved your writing style. I can't wait to read more from you :) |
| flowersinthespringtime 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI totally loved this. it was so cute. I never actually thought of them as a couple! |