I'm laughing. This was funny. Thanks for the smiles, and several good lines.

Man, this fic is so perfect, that I could mistake this as actually being part of the actual cannon story.

That end is a WIN!

I like the list...

Well written. Good read.

Hahaha. That was really good. You nailed both Jade & Anise perfectly. The list in Jade's mind had me chuckling out loud. I adored their interactions, from speech to actions, and even the two letters at end. So in character for them!

Jade's remarks on fatherhood were also really great, haha.

Excellent writing. Jade & Anise really are two interesting characters and have a great dynamic; you wrote that dynamic out flawlessly. :)

-iTomato

great fic! perfect characterization

AH I loveedd it! Brilliantly, heart-warmingly, CREATIVELY(!), boner-popingly, & comedically written! (Lol, sry boner just random)

Looking forward to reading more of your work(!),

Love love love love love-d (the dialogue, ending, & portrayal,

Mystica

Sweet dynamic.

All I can say is that this fic is awesome! Jade and Anise were very in character! There was one typo I saw but nothing too major. Anyway, this fic is cute!

I love Jade's solution though...xD

Wow! Anise and Jade fics are hard to find, and GOOD ones even harder!

I liked this. It was cute and it made me laugh. You have awesome characterization too - Anise's actions and Jade's final reply are spot-on.

And I like the list. Very spiffy concept.

Where to start? Well, I'm really glad you wrote for this fandom. I remember reading your fanfiction for Fullmetal Alchemist and Suikoden and really enjoying the...I guess...energy? (I have no idea. I'm very sorry about this.) Hm. Well, either way, I'm very glad you've brought that wit I adored to this.

Anise was just so lovable in this, and Jade was so...Jade-ish. Their voices were very present here, and it was such an amusing read, with the appropriate tone throughout.

I'm still marveling at your work, even after all these years. (I think it's about three.) Way to go.

Wow, that was mildly amusing. You get my applause. - Heh.

An awesome fic! I must say that they were both very in character and the fic itself was very well written.

This is absolutely the cutest thing in the world. The characterization is spot-on, and I love Jade's solution to the problem.

Very nicely done. Your portrayal of Jade and Anise is remarkably apt and thoroughly enjoyable. There are one or two places where your grammar slips up (case in point, semi-colon that should be a comma in: "Really now," he replies; "days without your company were like days without sunshine"), but nothing so much as to take away from the overall smoothness and level of enjoyment that can be derived from this piece. Congrats on a fantastic work!

There is no word for this fic but 'amazing.' You managed to capture everything that makes Jade and Anise's friendship so entertaining and condense it into the minimum of words.

Please keep writing. The fandom needs more authors like you.