PERFECT!

Description and story flow have meshed perfectly in this chapter, commendable! Also, the way it's written immediately reminds me of the Anime, very good characterization, and even have Ash and Michael meet, pure genius! ^-^

...If you can't tell, I'm RREEAALLYY happy about this.

I hope this'll continue on, most Orre fics don't stretch that far, but I hope his one does.

This is such an exciting story! I love it. Update soon!
~misty4ever

Michael's a cool kid.
Lovrina shouldn't have sent Jessie and James. Then again, they WERE lying...but those idiots will screw everything up, as usual.

Finally! A pokemon story where Ash goes to Orre! Thank you lords of the pokeficdom!

It's written very well, and to the point. Maybe a tad more description would really tickle my fancy, but nonetheless the concept is what I've been looking forward to for forever.

...I wish that they'd go there in the Anime. Orre is by far the coolest region, plus, I would LOVE it if Pikachu got snagged right in front of Ash (yes, I am a sadist when it comes to Ash losing his beloved Pikachu. It makes me laugh, go figure. >>)

I'll keep an eye on this because it started fairly strongly and kept my intrigue. I hope to see more soon!