Cute. Some grammar crap, but otherwise a very good story . . . poem . . . thing.

Ha! I found where I was. I'm the first reviwer for this poem. Now time to disect and anylize it . . . my s key sticks a little . . . anyway.
the mood of the poem starts out sad . . . but ends up happy . . . because the Doctor comes back. Right? I don't know. I'm guessing that's who you're talking about.
My advice is . . . to make the "because there he is" more dramatic. "the sorrow is gone" is a good line, but it seemed that everything changed too suddenly. Yes, I thinking deeply about this, because Casey was suppose to come over, and she still hasn't shown so here I am