Aishiteru for writing this! It was beautiful and it deserves far more than 4 reviews. Sadly, we can only review once per chapter. I love how you kept Will so well in character, and Miss Jennifer definitly sounds like she could be in the movie. Keep writing, and "godspeed". Haha

Ai,

Raven Black

A great story. Very good.

Aw. That's cute. I like that. I like how u had Will be himself, even tho he's capt of the Dutchman. very good.

Heehee! I am the first to review this one! I love it!