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SakariWolfe
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuse"artha doesn't really matter cause i don't like him"
LOL!!

anywho, great story. luv the first chapter, but i'll have to keep on readin it!!
ladedamnda
2007-08-22
ch 5,
abusethis is getting pretty cool, update soon
XXXFlame-HazeXXX
2007-08-21
ch 5, anon.
abuseOh ...this is getting interesting!! Poor Kitt although it would be pretty cool to be the Queen of Hell! Keep up the great work!
Sai
2007-06-28
ch 3, anon.
abuseGreat chapp. You might want ta change the spelling on the second to last sentence at the beginning to 'as' instead of what ya have.
Gray Aibou
2007-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuse"Artha really doesn't matter cause I dont like him"

LOL.


Anyway, lol this would be better with a bit more detail. But still a good idea, Yay for comas! (I like comas)

Welcome for all MSN lovers to add me :P
Sai
2007-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, DragonEyegirl, you must really like writing. You're doing a great job! I personly like reading your fanfics and can't wait 'til you update this and all of your other DB fanfics!
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