Wow! Points for originality, thats for sure; I always did wonder what happened to Kain (Cain? Not sure on the spelling...). A very sweet and sad story, well done!

Only tennsy thing I'd say about this are the numbers involved. For example 30 yen would probably buy a boiled sweet and most passenger aeroplanes cruise at 35,0 feet so 300,0 is a leetle high!

They're just tiny points though, and nothing to do with the writing quality. Keep it up, I'll be looking for more by you!

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