Wonderful job on the writting and visuals. I personally would have liked to see less of the
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brackets because I was not lost on who was the focus.
You portray Bakura so well even in the simplest things I love it. The entire premise of the story is extremely apealing to me, and I love how you did not directly jump into the yaoi as many make the mistake of doing.
GAH! I love this!
Keep up the good work.

ME LIKEY!

Read this story and listen to 'The World Is Not Enough' from the movie! It fits perfectly!

Love it!

Love,
Kuro

Really interesting idea. I just wish you didn’t have Kaiba go into a fetal position whenever he thinks he’ll get hurt - he’s a good fighter, remember? and he won’t ever let anyone see him afraid. And I wish it was longer than one chapter, so Yugi and the others could be in it - I’d love to see (read...?) their faces when they find Kaiba acting so weird, using magic, and discover Bakura’s there. Hee, hee, hee... That’d be so nice to see...

Wow! This is an awesome fic with an interesting premise!

Strange, but cool at the same time. So, Ryou died in a bus accident? Bakura and Seto working together equals chaos! Love the story.

This is one hell of a good story.. I really feel sorry for Seto. With Bakura inside his mind, no telling what will happen.

brilliant. Very well done. great plot. excellent flow. and a great idea, that I've never before seen. Great read.