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Scherherazade
2009-08-18 . chapter 5
I love the fairy tale atmosphere of this story. It is beautifully written. I hope you decide to update someday. I'd love to know the ending.
Napris
2009-07-30 . chapter 1
I still love this story. I read this again and I found flaws, but I truly feel this fanfic is awfully underappreciated on . (sigh) You just can't help it. Few people have good tastes left these days. All they want is some stereotypical, mediocre fanfic to quell their obsession over a ship. Not many appreciate the finer areas of language anymore. (heavier sigh)

ANYWAYS. I see it's tough for you to keep on going with Mr. Anderson's pattern, but if it helps you update, you don't HAVE to stay within the boundaries. I mean, you've shifted so many roles and happenings, it's okay if you totally make it whack from now on. Just keep doing what you're doing with the words and relax on the plot. It'd be interesting if our Snow King is actually more human than the story let on, and he really fell in love with Haruhi, who never fell out of love with Takashi.

GOOD LUCK! I HAD AN AWESOME TIME READING THIS!!
-Arashi-Yuuna Fukushima-
2009-07-11 . chapter 5
Your story is really interesting, and I really liked it.
I know it's been so long since you last updated this story, but I hope you'll update soon! XD
Cat's Eye Nebula
2009-07-01 . chapter 5
Wow. I really love this story -- it's very stylistic, and very well-written and subtle. Definitely adding it to my favs, and I hope you write more for it.
Kelii-chan
2009-06-03 . chapter 5
wow cool I love it plz update soon i love HaruXMori stories yours is gr8

ciao Kelii-Chan
dazed
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
I can't believe you included snippets of the Snow Queen... it's my absolute favorite fairy-tale. For that, it makes your work even more adorable than it already is.
Mournsong
2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this story is so wonderful. The characterisation is wonderful, the references to "The Snow Queen" are wonderful, and the writing is awesome. I really, really, really hope you will continue! I guess I'll go worship you now...
Napris
2009-01-24 . chapter 5
What a beautiful story ... it made me tear a couple of times. It's so pretty. I love love love the fairy tale references. I love it. The overall feeling is like a fairy tale. It's so pretty. This is officially my favorite Ouran High story fanfiction.
makka-na-yuki
2008-10-27 . chapter 5
This is definitely a brilliant piece of work. You're a wonderful writer. The plot, the tone... everything about the fic is just beautiful.
sonofon
2008-09-29 . chapter 5
Oh wow, I love this story to bits and bits. Everything is so different, yet so right. I love your characterization of Kyouya..there's this evilness to him that you can't help be drawn to. Takashi is such a wonderful character too. He's protrayed in a different light - he seems so much more real than in the series when he's not given a lot of limelight. And Haruhi. Wow. I could go on and on. So in short, great story! :)

I really hope you update. This story has made my day.
chemqueen
2008-09-14 . chapter 5
This just defies words. It is absolutely lovely and heartbreaking - I have cried twice in the past four chapters, I'd feel pathetic except it was completely worth it - and it's horrid that now, of all places, is where I have to stop.
Wink987
2008-08-09 . chapter 5
There is only one word to describe this story: beautiful. The words flow and the sentences make me want more! I absolutely love this!
well done and keep writing!
fire dragonheart
2008-07-30 . chapter 5
nice
workshy
2008-07-09 . chapter 5
I love this story. But, no Tamaki? Anyway, please update. I want to see what happens when Takashi sees Haruhi (who I assume will be with Kyoya) at the library. The dramz...
sonata hirano
2008-06-19 . chapter 5
i love it so far cant wait for the next chapter
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