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| Ladykestrel 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseBeau! Loved it! Still owe you that email but it's coming! Best, Ladykestrel (Chris/Tercel3) |
| xyber116 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was pure awesome writing. I can't wait for the sequel of Playing the Hero. |
| missiemeghan 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseWell written... I love Brass stories. One question though, where did the scar between his shoulders come from? |
| Tanguay18 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story. I'll admit the main reason I decided to read it was because I am a hockey nut! Lol. But, seriously, it was a good story. I liked it. My favorite line was “I feel like a piece of cheese.” Hahaha, awesome line. Great little story, gotta love when two of my favorite things are combined (CSI and hockey). |
| Gib 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseHappy to see another story from you. As always, great job. I enjoyed the hocky game and the reactions of everyone. At first, I Couldn't believe Nick was talking trash about Brass and then bet against their own team but you summed up Nick with one phrase,“Hey, twenty bucks is twenty bucks.” Totally in character. Great job. Loved the explanation as to why Brass had to go back into the game. So true. It was perfect. I so enjoy reading your stories, keep them coming. -Gib- |