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ElaiaFlameWolf 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseFor some reason, when Balthier gave that hankercheif to her I automaticly fell in love with this pairing, I love the story, especially since it's from Basch's POV. You write very well.
Lady PenThier 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuseBecause I too have weird tastes, I loved this story. Basch's point of view was a different take to the Penelo/Balther pairings. I'm gonna read your other oneshots since I enjoyed this one.
The Blearing Phoenix 2007-09-11 ch 1,	abuseWonderfully done, I think you wrote out the moment beautifully. Balthier's such a cunning little demon isn't he? But he's a charming and lovely one at that. I like how you made Penelo so oblivious.
Statik 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseLovely short story. I really enjoyed each character, especially Basch's rather possessive temper. I think it was wonderful! I also liked how you described Basch's thoughts in here, very well done and great job!
sarasa cat 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseNice! I really enjoyed reading how Basch sees the party around him and I can completely see this story happening. The sentence "When he’d been in court, he’d seen plenty of this behavior and he did not like the indecency of it all one bit," pretty much sums up how I see Basch with regard to these matters in general and Balthier's behavior in specific. Looking forward to more!
Lucifer Yaway 2007-06-19 ch 1,	abusethis was wonderfully written. I wish it was longer or it had a sequel. can't wait to see what you write next.
Cailin Skylark 2007-06-17 ch 1,	abusewhat a wonderful one shot. i'm surprised i missed it especially since i'm a huge fan of balpen fics. your story is unique in that it comes from basch's pov. fantastic idea. write more soon!
phedre87 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseI thought this was soo cute! I actually really love the PeneloxBalthier and PeneloxBasch pairings...I really don't think they are weird at all. Weird is Balthier x Fran-She's not even human! Anyway, I liked your story and thought it was adorable. I thought Basch was a little OOC but it's all good. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Ec-rud-girl 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseI loved it! I can totally see Basche being all observant of the others. Baltheir, what a little fox, falling for Penelo without her even trying to catch his attention. Awe, it was so cute. Very well written! Good job, Ecrudgirl
MrsGrizzley 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseFor some reason, I really like this story. I can really see this happening, particularly Basch's protective attitude. My one question is whether Penelo would really be as oblivious as you make her out to be. Though her being oblivious makes it all the more humorous, since he's avoided so many feminine traps in the past, to be caught by one who wasn't setting a trap at all . . . I like it. I really like it. Mrs. Grizzley
Shiann Reece 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseWow, I loved this! It is wonderfully written--and I could just see Basch thinking these things. I am kind of a Balthier/Penelo and Basch/Penelo shipper. I really loved this. Didn't I just say that? Anyways--I thought it was great--I hope you write more!

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