=D One of the most beautiful endings ever! >.< I loved it!

It's late and i'm pretty disoriented but I wanted to say

the brother and sister duo remind me of Luigi and Pavi from Repo!The Genetic Opera. Power-hungry and sex-craving.

I love this story. I'm really glad Sakura has decided to let go of those issues. It's a shame that she and kakashi argue so often about those things important to them, but to be honest it reminds me of my own relationship (thankfully much healthier than that).

I can't wait for the mystery to unravel. I'll be back to finish this tomorrow and I hope to see more fics from you in the future. Please keep writing. :]

Although the ending's a little bit too sweet for my taste (I'm an angst **, but that's my issue, not yours), I have to tell you that I've read this story at least three times and it gets me every time. Bravo.

You're such a good writer!! This story intrigues me from the beginning till the end. I was worried you would let Sakura and Tsuki die in the end... That would've been so sad! I just like happy ends. And I loved this ending!

I'm planning on reading your other stuff too ^_^ Hoping it's equally good or better! Thanks for posting your stories here.

Excellent story!

This story was amazing. I remember when you first started with this and I was so excited to read it to the end. And the ending was so good! I was so scared for a moment that you were going to kill them off at the end and make the ending really tragic. But you didn't so I was definitely relieved. i think you did an awesome job in developing the plot and keeping it extremely interesting through out the whole way. I really enjoyed it! Is there a possible sequel? It would be really amazing to hear the crazy family life of the Hatakes.

Excellent work!

Strawberrylover

One of the nice things about making an author list is that you can go back and read all the things they have written. Which is why I have stayed up most of the night and lazed about this morning reading this. What a great story. The plot and character development were fantastic. You took your time with everything, which I really appreciate; it shows a real desire to write a good story rather than just push something out. While the characters changed and grew, they actually became more themselves, if that doesn't sound too odd. Fan Fiction allows us to fill in what Mashasi hints at. The mission was very well thought out, exciting and believable. I really enjoyed this. BTW, I hope you will let your fans know when you produce the non-fiction works. I hope to read those, too.

I'm not reviewing specifically for this chapter or story alone, but I was thinking just last night as I read through the past eighteen chapters (I saw this story a while ago, but I've had a...thing about Fics involving Kakashi and a child of his own. Though, seeing as you've never disappointed, and your writing is very sophistocated, detailed, well-informed, etc., I decided to give it a go, and I am extremely pleased with my decision, mind you :D) of your fiction that I should offer some constructive critism. I am, by no means at all, a professional, but as an observer adn reader, I feel I can at least locate and try to help with any area that could be improved upon. For example, I feel that your grammar is, for all practical purposes, precise, which it is. But! I've noticed as I read that you tend to miss some things. Which is fine. They're very small; it's the occasional error :) nothing big. If you scan over it, you'll get what I'm saying, if you don't already. I do, however, think that you could improve quite a bit with your sexual scenes (which I love, by the way ;D ). You could enhance on subtle stuff like detail, length, technique, feeling, experience. You know. :) You are an AMAZING writer, and you should know that. I really hope you continue to keep this up, and not just for the readers' enjoyment, but for your own as well. Thought you could use some help, since you seem to want it, and I want to provide it, so I really do hope this tid-bit will do just that.
You probably don't need to know this, but I'm only sixteen, and I can't get enough of your fanfictions. :D I'm also a member here, too, under this very name, so if you would care to send me some constructive crit my way, I'd be pleased to hear from you :).

I just needed to stop by and say you are an extravagant writer and you should never stop.There are to many people in this world that will threaten you and try to make you less of the amazing writer you are, don't listen to their spiteful words listen to the words of those who say good things.

On a happier note, you killed me with the last 4 chapters. First they get together then he CHEATS on her! lol it was a great hook i have to say, without it i wouldn't have finished the story. Amazing end just beautiful.

Can't wait to read more,

Blaxcherrie

PS. I will most definatly buy ur novel =P

lmfao e.e!! @ the last line of this chapter. That was awesome. *seriously laughed out loud*

Just read your AN at the end of chapter 18.

Frankly, your work amazes me. I've only recently discovered Naruto FF, despite being a massive Anime fan.

You spend your spare time writing for the enjoyment of others (such as myself) and it needs to be said, your doing a great job, albeit unpaid for now ;)

It's been quite a while since I've read a FF that has had me so engrossed in the story line from the start, your knowledge of the Japanese culture is extremely fulfilling, and your work is quite clearly a well thought out, incredibly descriptive piece of work. It's obvious a lot of time, love, and effort has gone into this story.

KakaSaku is now my favourite pairing. A match made in Heaven, as such vastly differing characters make for such an interesting story line. I personally don't understand the problems people have with it. You stated at the start that she is of age, I mean, she has A CHILD for crying out loud!

I hope you continue writing and eventually become a published author, I know I'd definitely buy your work =D

Your grammar and spelling are exceptional, I haven't spotted a mistake thus-far, and don't expect to. It's a shock to the system to find a piece of work so well written, a very pleasant shock though, I might add.

I also have something to say to the person that E-mailed you.

To that person- F* you. Jealousy happens, get over it.

Faithfully continuing my exploration of your fics,

S_H
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I don't usually comment til the end of the story, but that chapter was EPIC. 2 words- Zucchini bread. OMFG you are amazing!

I am completely, utterly in love with this Fanfic! Really, I love it! I've done tons and tons of sketches of it!! :D Dunno, I'll submit 'em someday on DA...And that's it, I just wanted you to know that I like your story a lot :3

Don't quit writing! Ever! >.< One hurtful email is horrible. I think your writing's awesome! Please don't quit!

read all of it...all i can say is the best fanfiction story i've ever read...keep it up!