 fanfictionsissy 11/24/05 . chapter 1Very good. Not sure if it's allowed on here because its just a poem, but hey, they let it stay here, and so who am I to rat? ;) Anyway, that was very good.
Ally |
 orligrl93 6/24/04 . chapter 1wicked awesome poem. it actually has meaning. good work! lol. |
 Jack-o 10/10/03 . chapter 1 WoW! i loved it but i think you should change a lil bit of one of the lines, i mean if you dont want to you dant have to! lol but i like it, i thnk instead of, *never a time to say goodbye* i think it should be *never a time FOR goodbye* idk you dont w/e u want to do lol , but it was really good. |
 TwystedFate 7/12/03 . chapter 1Bad?
THIS beauty?
Naw.
Nice 'un! |
 PinkyElf 5/12/03 . chapter 1wow, i thought it was great. you're crazy wen u say u wanna kno how bad it is! :P |
 Amara 12/3/02 . chapter 1 This is a wonderful poem. keep writing |
 Ms. Toes 1/19/02 . chapter 1 What about a happy ending though? Without the angst?
I liked this one. Sugar Princess never fails to surprise and delight. I am now reading all her fic. |
 zeldazonk 10/3/01 . chapter 1No, my ficcer's not done yet. It's gonna be another long one...wouldn't that be loverly? :) |
 HackeySackVibe 9/25/01 . chapter 1Awwwwwww. I like it! |
 PadmeSkywalker 9/3/01 . chapter 1It's kinda depressing but good nonetheless. Very well written |
 Adriana 9/2/01 . chapter 1 I don't think that poem could ever be bad. Every word in that is so true it hurts. I loved it |
 XenaAmber 8/24/01 . chapter 1Chica, you know I love it. Do you need me to tell you?
Amber |
 beetle654 7/25/01 . chapter 1It wasn't bad. I really liked it. Emotional, and it has the ability to be applied to almost any similar love story. |
 Colorain 7/23/01 . chapter 1Don't beat yourself up over it-I rather enjoyed it, especially the rhymes. I'm a sucker for a person who can write rhymes and make them work. |
 Katie 7/23/01 . chapter 1 I love Moulin Rouge. and i think your poem is very fitting. keep writing |