Very good. Not sure if it's allowed on here because its just a poem, but hey, they let it stay here, and so who am I to rat? ;) Anyway, that was very good.

Ally

wicked awesome poem. it actually has meaning. good work! lol.

WoW! i loved it but i think you should change a lil bit of one of the lines, i mean if you dont want to you dant have to! lol but i like it, i thnk instead of, *never a time to say goodbye* i think it should be *never a time FOR goodbye* idk you dont w/e u want to do lol , but it was really good.

Bad?

THIS beauty?

Naw.

Nice 'un!

wow, i thought it was great. you're crazy wen u say u wanna kno how bad it is! :P

This is a wonderful poem. keep writing

What about a happy ending though? Without the angst?

I liked this one. Sugar Princess never fails to surprise and delight. I am now reading all her fic.

No, my ficcer's not done yet. It's gonna be another long one...wouldn't that be loverly? :)

Awwwwwww. I like it!

It's kinda depressing but good nonetheless. Very well written

I don't think that poem could ever be bad. Every word in that is so true it hurts. I loved it

Chica, you know I love it. Do you need me to tell you?

Amber

It wasn't bad. I really liked it. Emotional, and it has the ability to be applied to almost any similar love story.

Don't beat yourself up over it-I rather enjoyed it, especially the rhymes. I'm a sucker for a person who can write rhymes and make them work.

I love Moulin Rouge. and i think your poem is very fitting. keep writing