*pouts pathetically* It ENDED. The chapter ENDED. *is very much saddened* Is there going to be an update soon? *hopeful puppy look* Pretty please? *pets them*

Darn you. *scurries off to scribble a picture*

So, eventually I might decide to go back through this story and critique everything.
I love, love, love this story!
These two are very in character; I could see all of this happening in the canon, no joke.
For not proofreading, your chapters have few errors, at least not enough to interfere with the reading experience.
One major, major thing: I very highly recommend that you use the review reply system instead of replying to all your reviews in every chapter.
It's not part of the story, you know? I mean long author's notes are one thing, but yeah...
Anyway, it's nice that you still update this story even if the chapters are few and far between. And it's a plus that your chapters are so delightfully long.
Ha, you should be pleased to know that I'm in the process of writing a fanfiction with TakeshixSatoshi right now.
Although the story centers around Dark and Daisuke (which doesn't repel nature..as much...! because of my sneakily devised alternate universe), Takeshi and Satoshi will be more than implied, as they are both vital to the plot later on.
I'd be honored if you read it, when I post it, which in all honesty could be a up to year from now, since I'm not posting anything until I have at least a very detailed outline of the whole thing.
But besides that, since this review is about your story, not mine...which is infinitely better because it is so much more...existential? Not quite the word, but yes...
Ha, I don't know where I was really going with that sentence.
But this fic is the most delicious combination of cute, serious, hysterical, daring, and there was this other word that made me want to start this list. Now I can't remember it and it's pissing me off. Anyway, it's a bunch of awesome things all blended into a substantially nutritious smoothie essential for the well-being of every shounenai fan's soul.
Good luck with the writing and all the rest of your busy and very promising future...haha.
Until your update, then. :]

Gyah!! This story is SO funny and SO cute! Please please please CONTINUE, ok? I really love all the fluffy parts and I like it when Satoshi acts all jealous but denites it! You make it sound so believable!! Anywayz, i can't wait until you update!! Hopefully soon!!

This story is cute! I never heard of takexsato before, but you write them really good and not OOC, so it's really cute!!

I luv this stori! Though i wish ther was more KradxTakeshi. There sexeh togetha! continu?

hahahaah lmao yesh! chu updated! lmaoXD diz tootalyy satisfied meh! lmaoXD! & the drama begins! lmaoXD sato-kun is somewat jealouse! lol wat i wld giv to actually see that happening lol & omg chu got meh into the satoxtake fandom lol usually i wld only go for satoxdai but omg dude, diz couple is jux so cute! im so glad i came up across this story! lol at first i was all like, Wut? A SATOXTAKE ROMANCE YAOI FIC? WHO WLD THINK OF THAT? lol then ma mind was all like, IT IS YAOI, CHU SHLD READ IT! lol & so then i starred to read it & i was all like KYA! SO CUTE! I NED MORE! lol & thats how chu got meh into the satoxtake fandom=D lol any wayz, diz chapter is so lenghty, I LIKEY! lol thank u so much fo' doing it that long! i was laughing my azz so hard & like ma bros dont kno i read yaoi & if i was to crack up on wat i wuz reading they wld be axing meh all diz questions on wat the story is about so wen a funny scene wld come up i wld bite ma tounge so i wldnt laugh or make a sound LMAOXD! & i was all like aw sato wants to kno more about take-kun on his childhood(sorta)lol & it was funny how they wld get of topic & i was cracking up wen takeshi was on the desk & all & then that one dude told him how he looked like a secretary whore
& all & then Satoshi(so dreamy lol)stood up for takeshi & told that dude off lmaoXD totally biting ma tounge off on that one lol & then wen they kissed in PUBLIC! LMAO i m such a sucker for fluffy-ness! lolXD! i cld jux see them already in ma mind kissing & then dat one couple being all uncomfotable of it lmao so cute! ehehehe update soon! but dont worry, im very satisfied so i wldnt mind if chu didnt update in one month...ok, thats a lie, plz update as son as posible! lolXD LOVE UR STORY SO FUCKING MUCH! LOL

Another lovely chapter 8D
I laughed so much while reading this chapter. And, you know, laughing is actually quite dangerous… I almost dropped my laptop on the floor because I laughed so hard… not good.

Anyway I loved Dark and Daisuke’s reactions as Takeshi told about Krad. Especially Dark’s “I’d totally bang him though”… <3 *giggle, giggle, gigglegigglegigglegigglegiggle*… I’d SO like to see that happen ;3

Oh yeah, the journalism class meeting thing… I didn’t really look forward to that – I thought it would be half boring and half awkward (I mean, it could easily get more than a little embarrassing with Satoshi there)… But I was so wrong – that meeting was really funny. Especially the last part:
“/Contrary to your beliefs, not all of us blondes are pure evil./” ~ sure XD
“Sexual comment: Six, by Miyasaki. Seven (and checkmate) by Me” – I really love the way Satoshi thinks ^^

I also like how Dark managed to steal the painting AND be very, very annoying. Poor Satoshi.
And the fact that you can see (or read, actually… dunno why I wrote see… hmm…) Daisuke’s objections while Dark and Satoshi are talking makes everything so much more fun!
“Oh? And what about…”
‘Don’t mention Krad. Don’t you dare mention Krad!’
“…my blonde half, hmm?”
‘Sometimes I hate you so much.’
Hehehe X3

Update soon.
Love from Astrid (a.k.a. Shira the fluffy llama)

Ps. I’ll send Failures in Life to you (when I find out how to do…) ^^

Takeshi is such a player xD Bad Dark! Don't tease poor Satoshi like that! Anywhoo, I thought this chapter is really well written, and really cute...and the makeout scene was nice ;D

Takeshi telling Dai about Krad was so freaking hilarious. I love how Daisuke is all very composed and absolutely not surprised to be tugged into a closet and more thinking about his food than the fact that Takeshi made out with a guy - until he learns it's Krad, anyway. I think you have the best characterization for Daisuke I've ever read on this site, honestly :D As well as Saehara's, but that's slightly easier.
Anyway.
Hilarious, hilarious chapter. And so cute. And hot - Take-kun's quite interesting (in a manner of speaking) and the kissing at the museum made me go "aww" (and laugh as I wondered if they were still in public, and was confirmed that yes, they were)
And I definitely adore the whole journalism club. Maybe I just didn't get it, but I think you mixed up the numbers with "Other Hair Colors: 2; Blondes: 0" though, since as far as I know the evil ones are the blondes here ? Whatever.
So happy this is back to life~

:D Hooray for updates~!
I really liked this chapter X3 No one can beat Satoshi in a verbal battle >w<)b
:O But I'm wondering if we'll see any of Takeshi's dreams? I think it'd be nice/weird to see his 'Dream Satoshi.'

Can't wait for the next chapter!

- Enski

Stupid review button...
IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE LAVENDER, FF, NOT GREEN!
...The buttons on this site have issues with me, apparently.
The pretty lavender button used to be the review button, but no, apparently lavender isn't manly enough for the awesome power of reviewing, so they had to change it to green.
Everyone knows Ravenclaws are better than Slytherins, damn it!
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Putting the...annoying...atrocious...GREEN...review button aside...

Oh my god! Dark told Satoshi everything Takeshi said about Krad? He is such a girl! What man actually shares gossip willingly? What man?! You are not a man, Dark Mousy, no matter what the women say! ...Though Take-kun amuses the hell out of me. Poor, poor Satoshi, in denial as he is. And Takeshi too, for that matter.

I loved the meeting Satoshi attended. It made me giggle. And his mother? So glad you included her. I love vol.12 when it showed Takeshi's dad being scared of her. Course, I would be too, she seems like a tough woman.Huh, maybe she should be put in charge of the Dark case. She could handle it. Course Detective Saehara wouldn't take that too well...

And the museum? Epic. Total make-out in front of valuable art! Of course, if I had seen that, it would have made the painting mean so much more. Now, I guess that's enough of my rambling. I can't wait until your next update! See ya!

Hold on a moment, dearie. There aren't going to be any lemons? I'm so hurt I could cry. Please prove me wrong.
Anyway, the chapter was really well done. I absolutely loved Satoshi and Miyasaki's scene. Freakin brilliant. Bringing Takeshi's mom into the story really baffled me. Many authors go with the easy way out "she's dead". I like how you characterized her though. It doesn't seem so odd now that Takeshi's... well, Takeshi. His mother had an impact on his life, even though she was away. SATOSHI'S GETTING JEALOUS. Dark telling Tosh that Take liked Krad's kiss was... amazing. Love the love triangle idea. Although I see Niwa as a damsel more than Take. And PDA. Perfect.
Please continue. And fast. I'm obsessing :|

... Dark is evil. Really, really evil. D:

And Takeshi's speech reminds me of those girls that uses 'like', 'duh', and... other overly girly talk. Yeah.

Other than that, it took me 20 minutes to read the chapter! Woo! Satoshi defending Takeshi? PRICELESS. The character history you create for Takeshi? AWESOME. It's making me like your version so much more than whatever his canon info says (if there's even any).

First off... HAHA I FINISHED BEFORE YOU!

Secondly: I love revelations... @__@ Time for Takeshi tee hee

3- Well.. I wrote something down on my envelope that I wanted to comment about, but I was apparantly to excited, because I can't read what it says... looks like ckedandkot. ... What the fuck is that?

4- Yes! More dreams! Tell Takeshi all about your dirty little dreams Satoshi!

5- GAH YOU PUT MORE ZOMBIES! Why must you torture me so... T_T

6- ...XD I love that, "Speaking of Organs... What time is it?"

7- I keep wanting to turn 'Mister Hiwatari' to 'Master Hiwatari'. Come on Takeshi... Call Satoshi your master.

8- I still love that Art Kiss (and that's what I'm officially naming it). Even though you told me all about it a few days ago, I'm reading it now, laughing my ass off. I would have been clicking a camera to have pictures to commit suicide to later.

Speaking of Organs.. I need to sleep.

~Kupo~

Woot! I love the -- Wait.. Must go in order.

1- Hey! What's wrong with the yaoi fangirls! *pout* I'm a yaoi fangirl..ish... YAOI! WHERE?!

2- Zombies. You always have zombies... and they're always trying to eat me. And not in a good way!

3- At Satoshi's dream I was getting hot too! I had to unbutton my shirt and everything... Only.. I didn't have Takeshi all over me... Damn.

4- Finally Krad appears! I love you Krad! K- I wish you death loud one. M- Aw! I take that as 'I love you too.' K- *deathglare*

5- Just this story is fantastic, and you just posted another chapter! YAY! *goes to read*

What? Sleep? Eh... I gave up on that idea halfway through this chapter. (Satoshi's Dream) xD

~Kupo~