I actually have a Shiny Espeon XD She's adorable. But now I have guilt T.T

This Espeon has a surprisingly good knowledge of game mechanics and characters.

This is really, really good i love how you've written from the pokemons point of view and how you've turned something esentially good into something bad. I like the fear running through the peice and how you jump from what is happening at the moment to memories and generalizations of experiance.

although i think where you put 'try and starve off that day' you should have put stave off, stave off is an actual phrase starve off isn't.

Other then that all is good.. i like it.

Very touching story about shining said was true about shining pokemon.

to the shining espeon: if i came across you, and you were in very bad shape after a fight i'd pick you up, take you home with me, tend to your ingeries, and not force you to fight. you wwould be more like a pet, well taken care of, and loved. how would you feel about that?

to the auther: great story.

True, but not. I have a Shining Pokemon, and it's happiness is maxed out! I treat Pokemon well, not just they get stronger though. To me, Pokemon is like Fantasy Nintendogs. I don't like

it how you prosecute all trainers of being bad in that story.

But nonetheless, it IS well-written.

Wow. This is one of my favorite stories you've written. I love your work; you actually got me off my bed and onto this site. I love my three shiners, (Umbreon, Jolteon, and Glaceon), and that is something I always found interesting; how would the pokemon react if they looked different? How would the others treat them? Like gods? Demons?

Whoa... that is so deep. It is true that everyone wants a shiny, and you took it to a whole new level. i love this fanfic.

i feel sorry for the Espeon. psychics are my fav. types, like i said before. great story.

An interesting view from a very different personality. It was a good perspective and a nice POV.

I've often wondered, you don't like Pokemon trainers that much, but why do you play Pokemon? Good, KEEP WRITING!

Poor Espeon. :( :( :(

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Farla, just one thing. It's a SHINY Pokemon, not a SHINING. In many websites, that's the term. I hope you will accept my advice. It's a sad and sweet story, frankly, but shinies are not the strongest. They are just rare and make the Pokemon game interesting.

Aww ... poor Espe-on. ;_; *snuggles* They need to stay wild and fwee! Very good writing, Farla, you write th' best fics _

Crimson is wondering if she can somehow help this poor creature. She has a really good heart, and none of her Pokemon are confined to Pokeballs. In fact, her Pokemon are allowed to leave whenever they want. They know she loves them and would never abandon them. She would love to care for that poor shining Espeon, just until it was able to fend for itself again. Heal it, feed it, then leave it to its own devices, unless it came back to her for more help. She is always willing.